Aw, I didn't want it to end! Very cute, I loved it :D

omg please add to this!

OMG I LOVE IT ADD MORE!!

Well, my words to the author after reading it were thus:


Awhh! That was brilliant! The whole way through I was thinking "Ahh how is she going to tell her?" and I totally didn't expect the ending! That was..wow ^_^


It really was. I loved it!

Beautiful. That's all I can say. XD

So cute! This is a really good story!

That was great! I loved it!

That was absolutely adorable. Its funny how children make everything less complicated. I loved Maia and could really get a sense of her character beneath the innocence that comes with being so young. Wonderfully written!

Also, I know what you mean when you mentioned how hard it is to stay in the same tense. I sometimes have to change a whole portion of my stories because I flip back and forth from present to past lol
loved it!

I'm smiling like goof and my cheeks really hurt, seriously.
such an adorable fic. Maias so sweet. oh and ths spoon-licking part could have taken a different direction, but NO. anyhoo please update your ofter fics too. I especially miss 'Learning How To Fall', pweety pwease.

Ella

It was amazing and real too! I think, that you could write a sequel to this. This story was about Maia and Kate, the second coul be about Jack and Kate. They didn't see each other 3 years, a lot of things between them can change... It would be interesting. Thanks for beutiful story:-)

See I have the problem of trying to stop myself from writing in the present tense... So frustrating! I once wrote an entire page in present tense when it was meant to be past and... gah I hate tenses :)

That was the sweetest Jate story I've ever read. I loved it! :)

I mean... seriously! That had to be the sweetest thing ever!

Ida:-)

I really liked this so far, but I'd love to see more! I just don't feel like you've said all you can say with it. I've read a lot of post-rescue Jaby stories, but I don't think I've ever seen one like this before, about Kate's struggle to reconnect with her family after going to jail. It's not cute, it's very real, which is good. I found the way you used present tense interesting, although I can see why that would be hard to keep up.

I'd really like to see how her relationship with Maia progresses (and of course whether she and Jack can rekindle their relationship) -- I was hoping, when Maia asked if Kate was going to be her mother, that she would tell her that she was her mother, but I get why she felt like she couldn't. There will be a lot of questions, and I'm not sure the answers can easily be explained to a three -- sorry three and a half! -- year old. (I love Maia -- the way you write her is adorable, especially the way she keeps saying "Toby likes you", as if that's enough for her!)

One thing I would particularly like to see is more backstory -- I was intrigued by the little bits and pieces of information you included about what happened to take Kate away from them. If you can, and it fits in with your plan, I'd love to see some sort of flashback, or flashbacks to that time, maybe even earlier, when Maia was born. It's not absolutely necessary, but I think it would help your story to show what Jack and Kate's relationship was like then, and how they came to have a child -- was it something they planned? Or something that just happened? And did Kate actually want her, or did she just go along with it because Jack did?

Anyway, good luck with your exams. I can't wait for your break, so that you can update some of your stories -- would it be too annoying of me to ask if you can please, please update "You'll Get Your Happy Ending" too? I want to see how Jack and Kate are coping without Jade, and whether we can expect another appearance in the near future.

Awesome story, love the sweetness. Very adorable Maia, could just imagine her twisting both her parents around her little finger. And its great for me to read a happy jate fic, since every fic that I've come across lately have been filled with angst, so thanks for this slice of sugar.

Beautiful!