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sealkid3
2009-07-08 . chapter 25
Great story, thanks for writing it.
Shenlong7
2009-06-15 . chapter 13
You know i always thought that maybe she had felt that it was too great a burden for her and possibly blocked it out instead of him actually using his powers. Though anyway I do enjoy this.
zoraya h
2009-03-29 . chapter 9
you are an incredible writer!
i love every chapter and cant get enough of this story!
i should totally be getting my homework done but i cant seem to walk away!!
keep up the great work!
remey74
2008-12-05 . chapter 25
PLEASE write an epilogue. IF YOU NEED HELP ILL BE MORE THAN HELP TO BETA JUST SEND ME A MESSAGE I SO LOVE THIS STORY
remey74
2008-10-15 . chapter 25
can you think about doing a sequeal? i really enjoyed this story and hated to see it end
Cristina Jade
2008-09-26 . chapter 25
Hi, me again. Only one word : WOW! I think there's not need yo say much more. :D

P.S.: A friend warned me that I should let you know that I'm over 16 because the story is rated M, just in case =/. And a epilogue would be great, if you ever write it... :D
Cristina Jade
2008-09-26 . chapter 20
Wow, really very good! Until now I'm finding it awesome! (And look, this must count for something since I only read the ones I like very much, because I'm Brazilian and it normally takes me a little longer to read and write in English than I do in Portuguese ;)) Very creative the way you explained about the virus and some of your previous chapters had me clinging to the chair in anxiety. I only have to make a observation and I hope you'll forgive me for saying this but that bugged me: I'm not sure if the thing you described in this chapter would be considered a virus. I learned recently in my Biology class that viruses are the only living beings that don't have DNA; it seems they are too simple for that. xD Anyway I woudn't know that quite right because I am what I think you would consider a junior student at high school.
But very good story! Good thing I am reading this after it's finished, or I think I wouldn't bear to wait for each chapter ;D
remey74
2008-08-21 . chapter 25
please do a sequeal i wanna know if lois is pregnant with another super baby
vampireprincess1606
2008-08-04 . chapter 25
this was a GREAT story!! i loved the plot and how everything ended up. I absolutly loved this story! You have a wonderful writing style and I hope you become an author of your own creation.
xxClois-LuverXX
2008-07-17 . chapter 25
i know you might be still having a hard time, i love this story and have read it way too many time it's not even funny but if you happen to think of anything to continue this story please do, it was my most favorite story of all.
hg-always
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
OMG! So awesome, I can't wait to read more!

Molly
fablewriter
2008-06-22 . chapter 25
Wow! Just - wow! Everything I wanted to see between Clark and Lois and written so well! The characterization were perfect, and the story was riveting. Great,great writing. Thank you!
<3 Superman
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Just finished your first chapter of the story and its getting very excited. Wow! what can I say, you are an extremely talented writer. Keep it up! I LUV your story.
kamiam714
2008-03-31 . chapter 25
YOU KNOW THE PAIN THAT I HAD TO FEEL TO READ THIS? i had to run to my mom, triped over my bag on the way back to reading this, landed on my poor legs (BOTH) and now sitting here reading htat you might not WRITE AN EPLOGIE?...oddly enough i am ok with that. but i might be better if you MAKE MORE!
Sakura Scout
2008-01-13 . chapter 25
Fabulous story. This is such a great continuation to the movie. Thank you for sharing. ^-^
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