So sweet and simple... Lovely story.

Simple and sweet
and all those other things that make a great Haru/Mori

Aw! That's kinda cute. =)

Amazing work! I love your writing style, it's really something different. And the ending and especially the last line just too cute for words! XD

L'amour. :)

That was an interesting story.

Fluffiness that mould make BunBun look shameful.

:)

Loved it lots

Dei-chan

Ahh lovely story! This fanfiction actually keeps Mori in character! :]

so cute

good story

Aw!!

That was so cute! I love MorixHaruhi and I feel like he's always pushed to the background, so, yay for that. :)

Beautiful. I love Bisco Hatori's work, but at times the humor of Ouran tends to overshadow the fact that Haruhi is truly in a different world, and is having trouble figuring out exactly what others are saying to her.

Especially wonderful interaction with Mori. I think gestures are what truly help the people in the Host Club connect, from comfort in thunderstorms to sharing strawberries. Words just can't compare.

Keep writing,

evilcatchick12

They make me happy. ^_^

I love the flow of your writing. It's stylized and thought-provoking, with interesting insights into the characters.