 shimmershadow30 2009-03-02 . chapter 1hahahahaha luv that itz awesomely cool haaha |
 sadisticb00gers-Modus Pwnage 2008-08-14 . chapter 1^_^ very short and light. Love the way you cut and mix segments. |
 suburban hero 2007-08-29 . chapter 1Hokay.
THIS WAS INCREDIBLY AMUSING.
:) |
 Komi V 2007-08-03 . chapter 1XD This is great; would love to hear more. |
 CoraxOnyx 2007-07-26 . chapter 1This is charming! I have been enjoying a lot of the Lambo Twin stuff and it is cool to see the comparisons you draw between the two sets of brothers. And what an end line. I laughed out loud. |
 Amilyi 2007-05-19 . chapter 1I have to agree with Drifting Wolf on this one - I had to read it through twice before I got it - not because of the way you worded it, but because I found it hard to tell where the scene changes occurred whith four different speakers. Perhaps you should use the 'page break' feature to show the sce change from brig to brig.
Otherwise, a wonderful little ficlet. ;) |
 Yoda's Padawan 2007-05-02 . chapter 1Hehehehe...awesome story. Short, sweet and to the point! ^^ |
 Dancing Mouse 2007-04-28 . chapter 1Nice little story you got here. I love both sets of twins.
Only complaint I got is that it was too short. Oh well, short and sweet is just as good. |
 Syntia13 2007-04-28 . chapter 1*laughs out loud*
Short and sweet indeed! |
 Drifting Wolf 2007-04-27 . chapter 1 *Reads over* Huh? *reads again* Oh! You got the lambo twins and the cassett twins saying the same thing at the same tim about the same prank! I get it now! I could just picture them talking together like that in a split-screen! :) |