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shimmershadow30
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
hahahahaha luv that itz awesomely cool haaha
sadisticb00gers-Modus Pwnage
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
^_^ very short and light. Love the way you cut and mix segments.
suburban hero
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Hokay.
THIS WAS INCREDIBLY AMUSING.
:)
Komi V
2007-08-03 . chapter 1
XD This is great; would love to hear more.
CoraxOnyx
2007-07-26 . chapter 1
This is charming! I have been enjoying a lot of the Lambo Twin stuff and it is cool to see the comparisons you draw between the two sets of brothers. And what an end line. I laughed out loud.
Amilyi
2007-05-19 . chapter 1
I have to agree with Drifting Wolf on this one - I had to read it through twice before I got it - not because of the way you worded it, but because I found it hard to tell where the scene changes occurred whith four different speakers. Perhaps you should use the 'page break' feature to show the sce change from brig to brig.

Otherwise, a wonderful little ficlet. ;)
Yoda's Padawan
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
Hehehehe...awesome story. Short, sweet and to the point! ^^
Dancing Mouse
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
Nice little story you got here. I love both sets of twins.

Only complaint I got is that it was too short. Oh well, short and sweet is just as good.
Syntia13
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
*laughs out loud*
Short and sweet indeed!
Drifting Wolf
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
*Reads over* Huh? *reads again* Oh! You got the lambo twins and the cassett twins saying the same thing at the same tim about the same prank! I get it now! I could just picture them talking together like that in a split-screen! :)
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