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Reviews for: Lament
Onyxlight
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
Wow...just wow
bynon carget
2008-02-01 . chapter 1
Its light simple and sad which I like.

the only problom is I am not even sure who is the living woman and who is the dead it could be Ororo dead and Jean is telling this story, heck it could be Emma even.
LadyLuckAJ
2007-09-30 . chapter 1
wow that was was good and sad...but mostly very instense. I loved how you had us feel for him through Jeans eyes.
slickboy444
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
Wow...that was intense! I was very drawn into it. Very personal and very emotional. Awesome characterization as well. I can truly see this within the context of Scott's character. A most excellent job. My only complaint is that it was too short. But I still liked it. Keep up the great work! Slickboy out.
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