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| bynon carget 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseIts light simple and sad which I like. the only problom is I am not even sure who is the living woman and who is the dead it could be Ororo dead and Jean is telling this story, heck it could be Emma even. |
| LadyLuckAJ 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusewow that was was good and sad...but mostly very instense. I loved how you had us feel for him through Jeans eyes. |
| slickboy444 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was intense! I was very drawn into it. Very personal and very emotional. Awesome characterization as well. I can truly see this within the context of Scott's character. A most excellent job. My only complaint is that it was too short. But I still liked it. Keep up the great work! Slickboy out. |