get rid of the last line and its perfect

Already been said, but great job with the Toko. Always nice to read.

Sweet and short. I liked it, even though I do not like this pairing in particular when put against others. Nice job.

I liked the taste thing. It was cute. ^^

good oneshot, i like it.

Short, sweet, and best of all: a ZOPH! Woot to you for writing one of the best pairings in the history of ffnet :P

Fantastic job with this, despite the fact it was a tad short for my liking.

kudos!

OOC much?

Nice,

Really nice,

yaay ! toko !


I like your stories just as much as I like toko (a lot)

;D keep it up .

I love this pairing it brings out the kinder side to both characters, the writing style really complements the piece. Nice one.

liked and added to c2!

I can't tell you how much I enjoy the creativity and humor in your works!