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Reviews For: The Branching of Trees

geek-chick
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI agree with Ellfine, this was a good story, and an interesting and realistic look at Galathil and how the twins were seperated from Elwing. The confrontation with Celegorm's captain was especially well-written and suspenseful! (Or did you really mean for it to be Celegorm himself? I wasn't sure if phrases like "Celegorm's servant" were written from Galathil's perspective or from the perspective of the omniscient narrator.)
Ellfine
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseIt is good to read a story about a character who is almost never seen in fan fic. You have done Galathil justice in this one. I like the idea that the children were split between Celeborn and his brother and I've glad you've written Galathil as having taken out one of the sons of Feanor. HA! Hooray for the Sindar!

Well done!
Calenlass Greenleaf1
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseSo sad...
I wished Elured and Elurin had never died, or that Celegorm hadn't been so cruel.
But this was wonderful writing.

~Calenlass
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