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Reviews For: Epiphany

Featherz
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseA lovely story, except that you consistently spelled Hermione wrong. No offence, but for me the second to last sentnce 'Draco Malfoy had an epiphany that night, the night he killed Hermoine Granger.' was completely ruined by the wrong spelling. And then you did it again, in 'Dramoine' in the A/N. I think that, if it weren't for the misspellations, this story would be on my favourites list. As it is... well, just read the book more carefully, looking at how HERMIONE is spelt.
thefictionalfreak
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseMy goodness! Such a fabulous fic! I truly enjoyed it and I praise you on high measures! This was written so beautiful, I could picture it all. I really loved it. It was dreadfully sad, but the way you described everything made the sadness beautiful. Who could have thought such a sad and disturbing plot could ever find its way to being called beautiful? Thank you for the read, I really enjoyed this story.
Don't stop writing,
Brittany
Inulover4eva
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abusedamn the angst.

damn draco for realizing too late.

damn for hermione for not living.

amazing though, i love dramione, angst and all.
minniequill
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYou did great! This is an excellent little fic.
Rhea Silverkeys
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYou've got a good beginning. I liked the beginning very much.

This line threw me off a bit though: "He knew the specter of his old school mate would follow him for the rest of his pitiful days." It just didn't really *go* with the tone of the rest of the piece. That entire paragraph is a bit too dramatic, in my opinion.

Other than that, though, it's a nice piece.
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