cool!!

What a great story! I've been following it for a while now, and I've been really impressed by the overall spelling, grammar, and general likeness of the characters. Any chance of a sequel?

I loved it!

Is there gonna be a sequel or something? I mean, because it's been mentioned how the Volturi will want her and all. If not that's just fine with me.
I think this fic was pretty good, congrats.

hahahaha! now the rules weren't specific, but i'll bet that you'll end up reading this cuz you're hooked on ff reviews AND it's still on msn!

DAMN! I'm good! :D

love you! :D

and yes, i used up a review to win a burrito! deal! :D

Nice

hey :) loved the story and the wa you described bella's change into a vamp and the difficulties she faced! :D
~bel

great story ytou planning on doing a sequal?

Hi!

I just finished the whole story and I wanna say I loved it! It's just great!

Contratulations :)

that was a mazing

Fantastic story! I enjoyed reading it very much^_^

Everything about this story is wonderful! You can really write! Also LOVED the story! :]

Hey! I really like your story. I just wanted to let you know that you never told the readers what Mike wrote in Bella's yearbook. Of course, I could be mistaken and I could find out in another chapter, but I just wanted to tell you right now.

~Opalheart

aw! this story was SO wonderful! :)

I can't wait to see a sequel if you do it! (if you don't it's still perfectly fine!)

the only criticism is throughout you had a few spelling, and grammatical errors, but in all honesty, it was wonderful!

9.5/10

*snicker* how very interesting...

but this was a nice chapter... definetly...

whee! Bella's a vampire! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D