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| Taeniaea 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusegreat story!! |
| Jd Midnight 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat story keep it up. As for upgrades. The frist one that poped into my mind was X-Ray vision. Donu why it just did. *shruges shoulders* just sounds cool. |
| ozma914 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great concept, Buffy being bionic; it opens up all sorts of possibility for a super-slayer: surprising the bad guys and having it out with the Council, just for starters. I like the idea of Buffy having a new eye -- it would come in so handy, plus there would be the story issue of adjustment problems with using her new vision. |
| Firewolfe 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWow I like it but the poor vamps are so out classed now. |
| Shadow High Angel 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOkay you have no idea how happy you made me by posting this story, i loved the first one and hated where it ended, i was worried there would not be a follow up story. So you just made my night by having started posting this one, love it and can't wait to see how Buffy adapts, as for an upgrade, that's a tough one, her senses are better naturally, but if i have to choose something than maybe upgrade her eye sight with an implant. Jamie in the series could here ultrasonically but Steve if memory serves could just see further, he did not see the ultraviolet spectrum and other such things so that might be good. As for slow updates, no issue from me, i am reading Lost Potter as well and loving that i will say, oh and evil place to leave the new chapter, anyway can't wait for new chapters of both stories. |
| Allen Pitt 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuse'usually' the bionic person gets an ear or an eye for super-senses...Buffy already has that (though I suppose one could then argue she could 'support' even better senses)--how about a built-in wireless modem so she can upload/download info? ie 'think' about a new demon, Giles gets the 'email', does research, 'sends' info on how to kill it etc? |