 Gettenshi 2008-02-24 . chapter 1That was a Interesting Beginning of a Story ^.^
O.O Harry is a Magical Hermaphrodite and he is the mate from Draco *Yatta* The best is that Harry is maybe a Archen, a creature with High Elfin and Vampiric bloodlines, and looks very Sexy *Smirk*
That the Archen comes from Harrys mothers side of the family because of her ancestral blood is very Interesting *Smile*
Please continue, please *puppy eyes* ^-^ |
 Fishy Anonymous 2007-07-23 . chapter 1 Keep writing, PLEAZE!! While the begining is more explaination then anything else, I write like that too, and I am many things, but never a hypocrite. The MH confused me for all of 0.236 seconds, though. :-) I kinda don't get the lineage thing, since they'd still use magic, wouldn't they, and Squibs are wizard-borns born without magic, not magic locked away.It wouldn't be a magical problem, but a bloodline and interbreeding problem, which could happen to not only them, but 'muggles' too. There are some grammatical errors, so I suggest reading through it slowly to see if it all makes sense, because, no offense intended, but some parts make no sense, grammatically. Also, it seems a little... I don't know, impersonall? Anyway, Hem... good writing, love this type of story, 'specially the magical creature bits!
Love,
Re.
P.S.- POWER TO THE PISCES! :-) |