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Death Sun
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
good
Hannah42992
2009-03-12 . chapter 1
good story so far. how will everyone react toward Harry's transformation? what will become of Draco and Harry's relationship once they get back to Hogwarts? please continue with it...=)
Spiffy Squigglemink-mantra III
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
oh dear!
Tsuki no Akebono
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
sweet-wolf-whistle-
nice i like it, update soon.
hokagegodessarya
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
add more soon plz!! it's an interesting story line^^
~arya minato and itachi
starbright37
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
love it. please update soon.
White-Tiger678
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
Love! Please continue.
Gettenshi
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
That was a Interesting Beginning of a Story ^.^
O.O Harry is a Magical Hermaphrodite and he is the mate from Draco *Yatta* The best is that Harry is maybe a Archen, a creature with High Elfin and Vampiric bloodlines, and looks very Sexy *Smirk*
That the Archen comes from Harrys mothers side of the family because of her ancestral blood is very Interesting *Smile*
Please continue, please *puppy eyes* ^-^
JadeAshes
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
Make Harry tell his friends! About his little MH thing. That'll be so cool to read about! I CAN'T WAIT!

UPDATE!

JA
lizard26
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
this is a very good chapter. i hope that you update this story soon. please tell us what kind of creature harry is and what that gold light was. tell us what everyones reactions to harry and draco is. what happens after this.
cyiusblack
2007-09-09 . chapter 1
update soon
Danielle
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
I really like your stories please update soon!
Fishy Anonymous
2007-07-23 . chapter 1
Keep writing, PLEAZE!! While the begining is more explaination then anything else, I write like that too, and I am many things, but never a hypocrite. The MH confused me for all of 0.236 seconds, though. :-) I kinda don't get the lineage thing, since they'd still use magic, wouldn't they, and Squibs are wizard-borns born without magic, not magic locked away.It wouldn't be a magical problem, but a bloodline and interbreeding problem, which could happen to not only them, but 'muggles' too. There are some grammatical errors, so I suggest reading through it slowly to see if it all makes sense, because, no offense intended, but some parts make no sense, grammatically. Also, it seems a little... I don't know, impersonall? Anyway, Hem... good writing, love this type of story, 'specially the magical creature bits!
Love,
Re.
P.S.- POWER TO THE PISCES! :-)
angel
2007-05-26 . chapter 1
Oh the faces of everyone whe they find out! it would be priceless!! update soon this is getting very interesting.
LilyJames addict
2007-05-17 . chapter 1
so harry's actually a girl, but you didn't want to have to call him a girl? anyway, nice :D v. amusing
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