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| sam-and-deans-lover 2008-08-24 ch 4, | abusethat was adorable great job i always wondered what would happen if she didnt die i wanted them to get together i hated it that she died great job |
| XxXEvilSk8erKidXxX 2008-04-26 ch 4, | abuseHey love the story please update soon if you do I'll give you a cookie okay? XDemonAngelX |
| The Worst Nightmare 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty much all dialogue. Personally, I'm interested in what Nick looked like, what Annie's hospital room was like, how she felt about Nick asking her out, etc. Also, everything is said, said, said, said, said. There's more words in the world, like sighed, gasped, mumbled, murmured, etc. Sorry if you think this is a flame, because it's not. This is my favorite non-animated movie. Nick is awesome! |
| running in circles 2007-05-14 ch 3, | abuseOH that's a good explanation for the dad getting off the police force. never thought of that. or is that what really happened in the swedish version? lol clever, bringing it in like that. ESH off with the shirt! meow! UPDATE! |
| running in circles 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseaw . . . yeah, i wondered why nick's mom saw her bleeding and didn't do a freaking thing about it. how's that for irony, dying in a hospital like that? yeesh. you'd think she'd say something. nice fic, though!! |
| Anime Girl23 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseAw. Cute. =) I like. |
| santarita's babygirl 2007-05-06 ch 3, | abusei really like this story i was so mad that they killed her at the end hopefully theres an alternet endeng on the dvd neway update soon *babygirl671* |
| Anime Girl23 2007-05-02 ch 3, | abuseAw, so cute. ^.^ Update soon! I'd write a better review, but I have to get to school. |
| Trina-D 2007-04-30 ch 2, | abuseRead Chapters 1 and 2. I love that you give a happier ending. Even though it is a little strange to date someone that almost killed you but, there have been cases like that in real life. They are a couple, Yea! ! ! And living together (I don't know about that one) but I guess since they made a promise. But I love how they were enemies and now the complete opposite. |
| Anime Girl23 2007-04-29 ch 2, | abuseAww. So cute. I'm so happy you decided to write more. ^.^ |
| Anime Girl23 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOKay, so that was just what I needed. The second I got home (two minutes ago), I just had to look for a fic like this. The ending depressed me. =( Killing Annie was just no fair. Personally, I think you could expand on this a lot more. The doctors saving her, Nick waiting for her to wake up, etc. Great fic. |