i love it but you really need to update alot more otherwise ill just forget about your story just like all the other people have and i wouldnt want to read any of your other storys now because you dont update alot and especially since you left this story at such a cliff hanger i dont mean to sound mean or bitchy or anything your a good writter

YES. YES. YESYESYESYESYES.

An update.

A short update, but an update nonetheless.

I was smiling proudly all the way through the Oliver/Miley part. Wow. I didn't think you'd pull that out. But I'm really happy. I'm extremely ecstatic about the mere thought of Oliver secretly fucking Miley behind Lilly and Jake's back. I'm sick. But still. Awesome. I'm happy. I'm really happy. That little Moliver mention just made my day. Thank you. Thank you very very much.

I cannot wait for your next update. This story is very well written, and pretty hot. Write more soon - and mention more Miley/Oliver soon too (and more Lilly/Jake of course, cause that is... wow). :D Well, you don't have to do that Miley/Oliver part...

...but I'd honestly kiss your feet if you wrote a moliver smut one-shot. I shouldn't be requesting, but I'm kinda desperate for some good moliver loving. There's NOTHING remotely close to well written in the smut-moliver category, and I really think you're just the person for the job. You're an awesome writer and you can write smut fluidly without it sounding stupid. You just rock. Be our beacon of light! WE NEED MOLIVER SMUT. You don't have to, but that would rock so fucking hard if you did, just sayin'... pretty please? :)

Anyways, enough soliciting from me... update soon :)

Nice! Love it Like loads.

You Should Write One For Lilly And Oliver

Cause they're Just Sexy Together.

And Yeahh.

Love it Loads Though

Katie_x

Very good story, great writing. Please update soon. x]

more please

Please update soon. I'm curious to see Miley's reaction to all of this... i don't really like loliver right now haha.

wow.. Uh Good story.. Is this gonna be a Moliver? :)

LOVE IT BUT MAYBE LILLY GETS TIRED OF JAKE BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T WANT TO "PLAY AROUND" AND TALKS TO OLIVER ABOUT IT AND BEGINS TO LIKE LIKE HIM! I WOULD TOTALLY READ THAT! THIS CHAPTER WAS OK I GUESS. LOLIVER MAKES SENSE!

i agree it was quite awesome.

i liked it a lot. you should most def. continue.

luv it. you should definatly update it ASAP!

i no you havent update in a while since you wrote others story

but at least try to finish this on and then contuine the others ones

i not trying to be mean or anything

but this is story is really good

and you are a really good writer

update if u can

pretty good, keep writing, and if you stop this one, you should write another one, your good at writing.

This was a good story. It was very entertaining. If you plan to, keep updating.

It was also sort of sad. Sad that he was cheating on Miley, who clearly likes him very much. Also sad that he and Lily have a strictly physical relationship and how Miley has most of the good parts- where Lily has almost no emotional attachment at all.

Best almost-sex scene ever. Update soon!