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ForgottenTales
2009-11-28 . chapter 21
Awesome story. Loved Harry as a demon. :D
nin_of_konoha
2009-11-26 . chapter 21
oh god that last little part just about killed me, it was so depressing when draco died thank the heavens you brought him back. interesting how hades gave harry away.
LOVED THE STORY
yue no rei
2009-11-22 . chapter 21
Ngaw that's such a nice ending :D
BeLlIxiEs
2009-11-21 . chapter 21
lol
it was lovely!! really lovely xD
thank you very much!

Belle
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 21
hahah he's in heaven now! but at least its drarry
brilliant story, i hate you
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 18
the retrievers are so immature
"he started it!"
"i am going to kill you all."

damnit draco, harry's doing this for you!
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
Trust Sirius to care that Voldemort was butt ugly
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 9
'“May I kill her?” Sirius asked politely.' Always causing havoc, that Sirius Black.
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
hahahha Sirius WOULD be good at his job

'"Cupid finally get you? Man, that sucks. I didn't think he'd really follow through with that particular threat."' Cupid's a demon? No wonder he hates me
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 7
i choose for him to spend the next six hours drooling over Draco Malfoy!
sparksfire-51
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Great start so far
can't wait to read the rest
Oh Harry, obviously the bottomless pit, is well, bottomless
maara
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
At the end of chapter 7 there was sentence
He could still get six hours of sleep if he hurried, or he could spend six hours standing over Draco's bed drooling.
And I wonder what Harry choose.
For my liking you too often mention Harry’s emerald eyes.
I so liked Sirius
“If you want, I can tear the horn off and you can pretend it’s just a little white horse . . .”
It made me laugh. He brings for story good portion of humour. This Sirius is full of live and you wrote him amazingly well.
Harry even when demon finds irresistible Draco who is just young school boy it warms my heart.
What I found weird about this story is how you mixed up ancient Greek and Christians believes and added something else what made me think about Buffy.
Also I want complement how well you wrote Dumbledore, Neville, Hermione and Ron. I’m sure that is how them saw Draco and others Slytherins in cannon books.
You should continue writing and give us another extraordinary Harry/Draco stories.
P.S I apologize for my English.Almost forgot to tell how much I liked your Draco you wrote him very close to cannon Draco and I like cannon Draco very much.
Lovedward48
2009-09-13 . chapter 21
I LOVE the Demon-Harry!! Although he did grow soft at the end (ugh). I love the plot, I think it's original and you put so much effort into it!! The Harry-Sirius and Harry-Dumbledore relationships!! They were brilliant!! So, is Voldi an angel with white wings and halo now? I have you now, that I've always preferred demons over angels. Angels are so boring. Is Harry all weak now or does he still possess his power after being converted into an angel? I can't imagine Draco being an angel either. XD It kind of feels like Heaven is a dump for the bad (as in good...you know what I mean) behaving demons. How come angels can be this devilish and stay in Heaven while demons get punished, thrown out or killed for showing some good intentions? Can't Zeus 'dump' Harry and Draco back into Hell? Saying something along the lines of 'their more demon than angel at heart. They'll be of much more use for you.' I mean Hades threw Harry out because he was of no use as an unmoving lump but now he's back up and about again (healed btw) and ready to do evil!!
Oh well...I'm gonna stop rambling now!!
Very good and fascinating story!! I really enjoyed reading it!!
Shmile
2009-08-06 . chapter 14
An amusing chapter xD
The part where various demons summoned by mistake is fun to read :D
And as Hermione doesn't admit she did anything wrong, she irritates me even more :(
Lovely story.
Shmile
2009-08-06 . chapter 12
WOAH! Thrilling chapter!!
The last bit was superb! Its also shocking how i can come to loathe Hermione and Ron so much! I know its not their fault (because they're ignorant) but stilL!
Its really awsome how Harry was banned back into Hell ><
LOVE <3
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