Very well written :)

very nice. Quite well written. I liked that you used that plot favorite of being post war and post hogwarts without making it too cliche or dumb. It was like all the other stories...but better. Please, write more, you totally can't finish there! It was just getting good!

Well, I must say that was a great fan fiction. It was short, direct, and explained things briefly while still allowing the story to glow. you're writing was excellent I applaud your work.