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Reviews For: My One Shot

Tinna 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou really know your craft. I read The Stay earlier tonight, and now this and damn girl, you got it going on. I'm having difficulties finding the words but I think the people before me said it really well: This was just plain and simply beautiful. Fantastic. This form is telling me to use the opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved, but I can't find one. I think when us writers work within the realms of fanfiction where you already have established characters, it is (in my opinion) maybe a little easier to write a story, because you can focus your energy on the story and the relationships between the characters, instead of having to focus on creating and maintaining your characters throughout the story. And what I think you do so expertly here is take these characters we all know and love and develop a relationship in only a few paragraphs (that's amazing) that's so intricate and seductive that you believe the CSI world has never been any different. In short, I think your story is perfection. Of course I would love to read a more developed story about these two as well, but I'll take what I can get. Thank you very much!
SilverTurtle 2007-06-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was really good. It didn't seem like it was your first slash fic. You pulled it off spectacularly! I'd definitely read more.
nixienoo 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseThis was totally briliant!! I honestly can say it was so well writen and beautiful that I read it twice, and I wouldn't be suprised if I read it again. The fic's that have you convinced are the best, and this was just that. I hope you write more :)
K.C.M.S 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abusehey! I really enjoyed you One shot! It's very well-written...! Never thought about Sara and Sofia... but it's great!
Uriel Falcon 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseNice work, loved it.
Peaky 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseBack off holiday and this fic is a killer! There really is just something...about these two together isn't there? I don't know if I'm biased because I think Sofia is one of the most beautiful women in the world (disagree with me if you like) but there is deffinately something. You did suchan amazing job, and I really felt the despair when they were sat in the bar. Awesome.
alex 2007-04-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh! that was great! i love sara/sofia and there's just a few good fics around here.. yours is definitely one of them! hope you write more :)
sarah 2007-04-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseyay! you miraculously pulled this off! now write more, please. thank you.

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