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| Lattelady 2008-03-12 ch 15,  | abuseLovely story. I'm not sure how I lost it, but I'm glad I found it again. You do a beautiful job with Sam and Ainsley. Thanks for a wonderful evening of reading. |
| CSIMel 2007-12-08 ch 14, | abuseOh, for my last review, I think I got you confused with a different author, so disregard that end comment. That's what happens when you check your email at 2am :P As always, this fic was wonderful! |
| CSIMel 2007-12-08 ch 15, | abuseWow. That was brilliant. Probably one of the best Sam/Ainsley fics I have read. You took that plot line from the show and made it your own. The characters were wonderful, the dialogue brilliant. I love how you wrote Ainsley - wonderful, yet with flaws. The ending was perfect. Thanks for writing this - it was a joy to read! (Oh, and as per last review, I hope this makes you blush - this fic was brilliant!) |
| kursk 2007-12-06 ch 15, | abuseGood last chapters, I liked how supportive Ainsley was, and I would have loved to know what happened after the last chapter. Write more soon. |
| Melanie-Anne 2007-12-06 ch 15, | abuseThanks for this great story; I'm sorry to see it come to an end. |
| Melanie-Anne 2007-12-03 ch 11, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story! Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
| kat 2007-11-09 ch 11, anon. | abuseit was my bday on the week that you posted your latest update so what a nice present it was for me to read this chapter. i heart the way you write sam and ainsley, they're so in character, reminds me of why i fell in love with them on tv. and btw, that airport kiss was hawt! great job, hon. and update soon =] |
| kursk 2007-11-05 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter, I can't wait for more of them in Cali. |
| AgtDanaM 2007-11-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseI was on vacation, what great updates to come back to. Excellent chapters, I am glad that they made up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. |
| katiebeth 2007-10-27 ch 10, | abuseGood chapter, but I found a few mistakes: "white fabric of the white comforter" (I think it sounds better with just the first 'white') "I took my nervousness out on your" ('Out on you...') 'They broke apart. “I love you to.”' ('...you too...') Okay. That's basically the beta coming out in me and me being grammar-obsessed :) Hope it helped some! M... if someone brought me flowers, cookies, and Fresca... hahaha And I loved the conversation between Donna and Sam. You have everyone's characters down PERFECTLY. Great job on this story so far and keep up the good work! I can't wait for your next update :) |
| kursk 2007-10-27 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter, can't wait for more. |
| mo 2007-10-21 ch 9, anon. | abuseAww the Sam-Ainsley mushiness is so sweet! Update soon! |
2007-10-18 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat chapter, I can't wait for them to discuss their plans for Sam's run. |
| Space-Case7029 2007-10-17 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter. Looking forward to more. Audra |
| kat 2007-10-16 ch 8, anon. | abuseah. i love this fic and im glad that you love sam/ainsley too! they're soo cute together and i love their banter and their relationship and you showcase that in your fic. update soon hon. you make my day =] |