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| UnityInDiversity 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Very believable as the missing scene of that episode! Realistic and in character. |
| Mom2abntb 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuselol at Brennan figuring when eight weeks would be up. This was very good...and probably very close to how the REAL arrest went! |
| iamwriter 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked that you wrote this, I rewatched the pilot the other night and I had seen the episode where she re-applied to get her gun liscene back, but did not understand why she did not have one, your story helped clear that up! Thanks |
| SquintyEye 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseYou know, he DID have to arrest her, didn't he? I just kinda glossed that over in my mind, I guess. This is so spot on! I'm with Bones, though... She HAD to shoot him! Oh well, at least she has Booth around to keep her safe. And sexually charged. Mwahah! |
| Megan Nichole 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseCute story. I liked it. |
| ProFfeSseR 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseFigured this would be a nice story to read during breakfast because there was nothing in my mailbox for me to read. I could definitely see this is how it played out for real as well. Poor Brennan though, knowing what will happen 8 weeks from then ;) Great story!! |
| Serienjunkie 91 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI can see Bren before my very eyes- so totally surprised about thsi whole situation. Really funny. ^^ |
| bertie456 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I always wondered how it went when Booth arrested Brennan and this seemed like a plausible and entertaining way for it to have played out. The characterisation here seemed really like the pilot, which I know I would've found kind of hard to write like a year later. :) Liked the way the actual arrest happened, with Booth being professional, yet slightly apologetic, and the end where Brennan's counting the days till she gets her gun back - hilarious and so accurate! Sorry if someone's pointed this out already, but there was a really funny typo in here too when Phillips was talking about the "voracity of your statement." I'm fairly certain you meant veracity, but that conjured up a picture of a really hungry statement in my mind :) Sorry, it was a tiny little point, but just made me smile. Really liked this fic and I'm now going to go read some more of your others. |
| Owl Emporium 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! :] Hehe, kinda fluffy. :p Angelica |
| BarbMacK 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuse:) This was great, I can so imagine the arrest going down like that :) First Bones ff I've read and I completely loved it :D |
| k 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was good. I was hoping someone would write about the arrest. LOL. Thank you! It made me laugh! Haha. :D |
| WhisperingLeaves 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is me, Kairasa. Anyways, I liked this story quite a lot. You mentioned it a while back and I decided to give your other works a shot that I hadn't seen. As usual, nicely written, and you kept the characterization right, as usual. I loved their banter, especially about a gun. Anything with B/B and guns are freakin' hilarious. Fantastico job!! |
| Oceanee 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat one, I love it!! I can totally see this as the way it actually happened in the show! ;) |
| Bailadora 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseThe last line was totally perfect! |
| Ampersand Ellipsis 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome!! |