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| Michellemarie 2008-06-15 ch 9, | abuseI wish i could beat the crap out of people like that...haha |
| Michellemarie 2008-06-15 ch 5, | abusethe end of the chapter was cute. im glad you're not making everything happen too fast. it makes the story way more interesting and keeps people reading. |
| Michellemarie 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseanother good chapter! I quite enjoyed the part when Jill punched the Soc in the stomach |
| Michellemarie 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseGood! Keep writing. :] |
| Michellemarie 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good, although a bit short. I just read the book and saw the movie, and i really wish none of the bad stuff happened. XD it was just way too tragic! |
| Maroon.Head 2008-05-24 ch 19, | abuseaw! what no "will you marry me?" come on! I still loved it! |
| habsrock08 2008-05-24 ch 8, | abuseIs it just me or does Soda sound gay? Just kidding :D Great story! cheers, Habs |
| Bobbie3926 2008-05-11 ch 19, | abuseI loved it! |
| StealYourPain 2008-02-27 ch 17, | abuse“Good! You are breathing!” “Thank you Captain Repeat-Everything-We-Just-Said!” agian great! |
| StealYourPain 2008-02-27 ch 15, | abuse“And so that's why President Lincoln started the Civil War with the South... oh hey guys what are you doin' back so soon?” Flippin classic! |
| SexyStar101 2008-02-04 ch 19, | abuseI LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! and being totally honest, I remember I read this story last year and I missed it so much I wanted to read it again! But I couldnt find it at all so I was like freaking out! xDD Now it's on my fave story list GOODJOB |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2007-12-10 ch 20, | abuseIt was pretty good. All I had to say was, the sexual content was a little TOO much because that included their first kiss ... it should of been like a first kiss and then maybe more later...but other than that, REALLY GOOD :P A+ |
| AllzStar 2007-11-08 ch 20, | abusewow that was really good! update soon! kinda Mary Sueish, but hell it's good anywayz lol update soon! |
| fantoallwritertonone 2007-09-07 ch 19, | abusewow quiet...I don't know anyway it was good |
| Skeledog Lover 2007-08-15 ch 19, | abuseFor the love of all that is fanfiction write a sequal! I want to see what happens! Does Darry still hit the roof? I need to know! Awesome story, awesome ending:) |