Man, I don't see why they didn't add stuff like this in the game; as a way of saying, "Congratulations on killing that Nobody, you heartless monster!"

A.K.A., that was a nice short-story.

Wow...

Usually, I hate angst, especially with one of my favorite pairings like Zemyx. But this is DEFINITELY an exception. It was beautifully sad, if that makes any sense. I hope your other creations are as good as this. ^^

That was sad. :c

That was so sad. It was realistic. I could see Demyx in my mind doing something like that after Zexion disappeared...

I like how you said Demyx's fingers were callused. Everyone seems to forget that he's a sitarist, and being a guitarist myself, I know that to have soft fingers while playing the sitar/guitar is pretty much impossible.

It gives it a very...real feel.

Reading a Zemyx that isn't fluff feels refreshing, hahaha...

Good Job~
Vonna Plum.

I like this...
Curse the world for understatements! >.< But yeah, I really do love this... it's flecking AWESOME!!

this was so beautifully sad. I love it.

Oh, poor Demyx! I hate to see him so sad. I love this, nonethless.

my heart aches

this is another really good angst fic. you're good at this.

aw... my poor dem dem!

You know something, I've read a handful of Zemyx fics but...never one as angsty like this. And this is a good thing, by the way. I loved it!

Wonderful fic.

That so sad *sniffs* T_T

..wonderful. beautiful. so short and so simple but so sad... :] i honest to god love this. you are a wonderful person indeed. x]

I think I just died from all of the... ooey-gooey goodness-angst... Ah... OAO

Excellent. Lots of emotion. Very ... melancholy