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VampsMoonAngel
2009-03-16 . chapter 4
That was awsome! And I would really want to know what Carlisle and Esme are. Keep up the good work and write some more! I really want to know what happenes.
hainexnoire
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
Wow. Reaaly good. I don't have any suggestions for improvement though.But also don't have any flames! Keep writing. (Please?)
Lily-Potter8
2009-01-11 . chapter 4
Wow. Interesting. I can't wait for you to continue.
helenluvsboo
2009-01-04 . chapter 4
Oh, I'm glad you've continued this story! I didn't want to give up hope! It's such an original idea! I really like this chapter... I'd like to know more about the relationship between Jacob and Edward :)
Rainy Day In The Pines
2009-01-03 . chapter 4
I LOVE IT!

Update soon!

*Rain
Rainy Day In The Pines
2009-01-03 . chapter 3
This kind of reminds me of... Swan Princess. or Shrek.

By night one way, by day another.

Cool... So her turns... vampire at night? nimal during the day?

Curse, or... the natural state of things?

*Rain
whitezcar
2009-01-03 . chapter 4
I love it! but.. I must confess.. I AM a little confused. So can the Cullen's shape shift from animals to vampires?
from,
absolutely irrevocably confused.. AKA beverley
whitezcar
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
okay. here are my guesses:
lion: Edward
Bear: Emmett
White Wolf: Rosalie
Stag: Alice
Deer: Jasper
Black Falcon: Esme
SO? are they correct?
I'm assuming the answers will be in the next chap, so i'll go read it!
I love your Idea!!

You mentioned wanting to read ff's on here... will you try mine? It is called YOU PRETEND LIKE YOU'RE IMMORTAL... I also have 2 others w/ only 1 chap... they are pretty much a more detailed summary..

Can't wait to read more!
-beverley
Neko Alice-chan
2008-04-21 . chapter 3
Wow. ALL of you're stories are addicting. You, are the most BRILLIANT person here, and you're woork is just . . . lookie there, I'm at a loss of words, and that NEVER happens. Please update soon!!(On any story, it wouldn't really matter, they're all my favorites.*Sheepish grin*)
dulcinea24
2008-04-15 . chapter 3
I'm loving this so far! It's so different from other stories.
Please update soon... I can't wait to see what Edward does!
helenluvsboo
2008-04-15 . chapter 3
I loved it!
Sarai
2007-11-02 . chapter 3
OH MY GOODNESS! that was intoxicating! the first chapter was confusing, but the second one was clear! I LOVE IT! its definitly going into my favs!
Kissa1
2007-09-30 . chapter 3
Aahh, you're using the traditional vampires-can-change-forms technique here. Interesting! And I like it. I really like that you're continuing this story, because I really liked the first chapter. And you don't disappoint here either! Good job, I liked it!
TimeAndTruth
2007-09-01 . chapter 3
I'm really glad you updated! I think this story could be very good if you keep writing it. The first two chapters are great, and its so different than anything else.
Kapperz1212
2007-08-31 . chapter 3
great great great writing. i cant really tell if anythings OC yet because i am still very lost.

have edward and bella met yet?
why are the vampires becoming animals...?
where did jake go??

ha just a little peek into my curious mind. im sure ull answer these in the chapters to come :)
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