 mood ink 1/13/09 . chapter 1*sigh* that was so sad T_T
you did a great job!
do write some more shikaino stories! ) |
 SkyMaiden 3/31/08 . chapter 1This was beautiful. It was very touching. I completley loved it. |
 Hime-Ai 7/22/07 . chapter 1aw that was really really sad...thought i'd rather have ino dead *walks away whisteling* |
 DeityofDeath17 7/5/07 . chapter 1I'm not a big fan of ShikmaruxIno paring, but you did an amazing job writing this story! I saved this and Model Behavior to my favorites _ |
 Winter Thunder 5/1/07 . chapter 1Well, I really liked this fic!
It actually meanns after a long time, but close enough.
But.
novelist742 published a fic called "Ohisashi Buri" and it has the same meaning as your fiction title. She published it a long time ago and it was SasuSaku. Unfortunately, she discontinued it.
So I'm wondering if you ever saw it or you never heard of it. |
 liltle 4/30/07 . chapter 1It was sad to hear that Shika died in this fic but i did read your warning and i just had to read it because it really did touched me,.. this story i mean.. and the ending when you mentioned about shika taking care of kurenai's baby for asuma, i really think that is what he would really do in the manga.. |
 Vince from Shamwow 4/29/07 . chapter 1This was sad.
D:
But really good. |
 ahou-hime 4/29/07 . chapter 1omg this was so sad..i miss asuma and now i'm gonna miss shikamaru! and inos just like kurenai! how sad! |
 Wings-chan 4/29/07 . chapter 1T-T
its so sad.. *cry* I nearly cried in the end..
its like the dead of asuma... |
 Midnighstar 4/29/07 . chapter 1First off I wanna thank you for making this for me! (Huggles) Thank you!
Secondly, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! My goodness! This is...wow! Its amazing! I loved it. Truely in character and very depressing! I LOVE that about it! Plus it came from the heart So once again I thank you.
Its truely something to be proud about |