Lol poor jack, didnt know he would actually do that.

sequal plz T_T

Cute. You made good addition by making Popuri their "daughter" and giving the dream an ending like that.

Aw, another excellent one-shot. I liked Jack's line at the end about why he ate the cookie. Cute!

Like it? Love it!

Keep up teh fantastical work! I look forward to more of your work!

Aww! I loved that! Elli is so awesome! Oh my! I sounded like one of my friends :D! Ok, now go write one about...Hmm...I dunno, one of the other girls dreams! Maybe...Popuri or something! Ya! hehe! Ok I'll shut up now! :D

aww... Kawii! lol. this is really cute! I like Elli too. I wish she was in more of the games. I never married her on my game so I don't know how how her dream senquence is. great job.

Can I say the following:

Sweet, Awesome, Goodness, Entertaining?

Yes, it's really all that! It's that good!

Heh, and loved the way you worked Popuri in as the "daughter".

Sweet, Innocent Elli and her efforts as the wife. XD

Fine, if Popuri can't be the Mommy for Jack, than she can be mine! :)

Thank you... just, thank you...

How cute! I've noticed you just added Popuri in the dream/memory. I definately learned from you. Oh and you added a little pokemon touch in there as well._

E! Absolutely adorable! Li'l Popuri and Li'l Elli playing house together regularly is all kinds of sweet, and the arguing over who has to be the husband this time is perfect. :D

I loved Jack's explanation for why he ate the cookie. I think I'd eat a mud cookie, too, if Elli was offering it. #_#

AWW!yay this was so fluffy and kawaii!aw,so cute,I liked the ,dont eat the mudpie-its not a real pie!ooh,they're so cute as little kids and it was so sweet lol my sweet tooth is happy and I have a sugar rush gah!I LOVED IT tons!I hope you write more like this and it rocked(heart-eyes)uwaah,its so Jack and elli are so cute,I loved this fic,and keep on writing!