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| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 9,  | abusePoor Paulette...and lucky Lilia for not getting anything ^^; ((At least not yet)) ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 7, | abuseTo be honest, I'm not a guyXguy or girlXgirl type of supporter, but I guess I'll just pretend that you're hinting brotherly friendship ^^; ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 6, | abuselol, poor poor Kharg ^^; I love the part when Kharg just suddenly walked in, the perfect funny plot twist ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 5, | abuseWell you know, she is a puppet, so I don't know if she can be bitten ^^; What an interesting idea, and you did a great job of writting it =) "Strange girl? Who is that? I'm Bebedora." - Bebedora ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseHmm, you're very random; you know that? ^^; ((Which isn't a bad thing)) ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 3, | abuseOh man, poor Darc and Kharg ^^; Darc is pretty clueless for a 17-year old, but I guess he is a Deimos. I love the brotherly friendship they gained ^^ I would suggest combining the chapters that have continuity so then it doesn't seem all scattered though. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 2, | abuseHmm, a little short but still nice ^^ The second sentence was just a little confusing to me though ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* That was pretty brave of Maru there I really do like this chapter; it's one of those short but sweet things. You've expressed Maru quite well and you even added some Kharg and Darc brotherly friendship. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Stormshark 2008-06-07 ch 14, | abuseI agree it is true. Sorry for not reviewing. The end bit was great. |
| Elf Wench1 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuseDefeated 40 times by Kharg...*Snicker* More drabbles please! I love them! |
| Elf Wench1 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abuseheh, heh. I could see Darc jumping out the window to freak out the village! Sneaky Darc to use Maru and Chocco to get Kharg. |
| Lunarspirit 2008-03-29 ch 13, | abuselols poor Delma |
| Stormshark 2008-02-17 ch 12, | abusePoor Kharg and even more poor villigers. Nice to know you have a life outsi8de the fanfic or I would worry. |
| Lunarspirit 2008-02-16 ch 12, | abusehehehe Darc's getting clever |
| Satoh 2008-02-16 ch 12, | abuseWell... as always I have no idea whom any of these comical beings are... But also as always... (cept for that yaoi thing that one time... >.< ) it was amusing. |