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Naflower05
2008-10-04 . chapter 27
countinue? please? yay!
Padfoot and Stacey
2008-04-04 . chapter 27
Well, it's been a great story so far, with, of course, the normal share of errors. I'd like to see the rest of this one. It's definitely an original plotline, once you get past the vampire part and the sister of James stuff. It throws people at the beginning, because too many horrid authors have taken both of those stances before.
muzical
2008-01-06 . chapter 27
Oh good! I was worried!
JoyMichelle
2007-09-12 . chapter 26
What happens next? I hope they help her become her old self again, and that she and Sirius stay together.
aclaff1002
2007-09-11 . chapter 26
I'm enjoying this story very much. I see you havent updated in a while so I hope you dont forget about this story, it sucks you right in!
Angels.Lust
2007-08-19 . chapter 26
Great chap! I hope you update soon, I'm already dying to know what the hell has gotten into Avril exactly! Mind if I take a wild guess? Maybe that vampire down there was her maker and he's taken her soul? ;)

Hurry up and update, we're desesperate here!

Biseaux,
MadeAnge
KiTAmOrA
2007-08-10 . chapter 26
Loved the whole page scene with the parchment! Rofl, werewolf porn. ;)

I think I enjoyed the chapter, so don't go saying it was annoying; it got me curious, and I'm sure I'm not the only one! Is Avril posessed? That's my theory; she's posessed by that creature thingy and it's trying to act like her and failing miserabley. :) Either you're being really obvious or trying to make it look like that so people like me look like idiots when we turn out to be wrong! Both is good.

Update soon, but not too soon! A rushed chapter is a bad chapter! ;D
AmericanPoet
2007-08-09 . chapter 26
I am in LOVE with this story! Its so beautifully written, unlike a lot of other stories on here! I've read all chapters you've posted today, and I love it! Please, keep updating as fast as you can!
I just can't help but wonder a few things:
1. What is Hayden NEVER going to let Remus do?
2. What exactly is on those missing pages...
3. She's possessed...but by whom...-eyebrow arch-

Wonderful story!
Sirius-Baby
2007-08-09 . chapter 26
plz update. The good stuffs starting to happen.
Arinna Black
2007-08-09 . chapter 26
I loved this chapter :) Please write more really soon I don't think I can wait much longer LOL
muzical
2007-08-09 . chapter 26
wow! that was definietly worth the wait! great chapter!
KiTAmOrA
2007-07-28 . chapter 25
...UPDATE!

I hate cliffhangers! You're so evil, update please I love Lupin. XD

Okay, enough squealy whining *shoves whiney fangirl in the closet with clingy fangirl, ranty fangirl, angry fangirl, giddy fangirl, and I-dont-get-it fangirl*...

I love the story. It took me a while to read it all, what with all the other things I do, but it really is worth reading; I love your strategy. I also read your story that plays more into Haydens and Remus's side of the story, and I loved it! Too bad its not updated more, I'm a Lupin fangirl XD.

Update ASAP and no sooner. :)

Hyuu
KajiMori
2007-07-25 . chapter 25
-whimper- I really hope that a new chapter is coming soon, because I hate cliff hangers!! I really hope that you update this story soon!! I love it!!
Atilia Dawn Black
2007-07-22 . chapter 25
So Hayden was trying to become a werewolf then... That was what was kinda runnin through my mind since she got attacked. Hope she feels up to explaining things a little more when she wakes up to as why she did it. Maybe she just felt this urge since it was already in her to become a full fledged werewolf. But I guess only she and you know. I liked this chapter, you wrote it well, and I like the long length. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Atilia Dawn Black
Arinna Black
2007-07-21 . chapter 25
Please write more soon ;)
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