Wow so good. it had the right amount of sadness and joy. and I glad that you made the penvenises have hope and faith even after being away from Narnia and after their fathers' death.

A nice, well-written story. I like the way you portray Peter's grief- it's not to overdone yet not too underplayed. Thanks for writing this; you did a very good job with it.

Good job. I'd be interesting in seeing this expanded apond. Perhaps with a few one shots?

Aw, so depressing. It's a good thing he didn't die in the books, otherwise that would put a damper on the whole series!

Wonderful! I love your style.

I think you did Peter justice. Being the eldest I think Peter would automatically want to take charge. But at the same time want to grieve. This was my favorite line, "I never replaced Dad; I just stood in for him until we could meet again. And Lucy, Edmund, Mum and I did." It gave me a vivid image.

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