How did Bella see the cloudy sky if she's BLIND? Work on grammer and spelling please. Geeze.

Awesome!

Awesome!

Awesome!

Awesome!

You reviewed my story,so I decided to return the favor.

Great story! It was extremely riveting, and it was different than all the other Twilight fics out there. It kept me on the edge of my seat.

By the way, I updated my story, "Unexpected Visitors".

Great job,

Morgan

I am really excited for the sequel, can't wait to read it

i cant wait for the sequel!

hey ;love your story wh ats the tittle to youyr se qual

I love your story! And it's okay that you can't write a million pages a day - I can't either;) I did wonder though, how can Bella see the cloudy day but not Edward and Alice?

Keep writing - ur so kewl:)

Love, ...well... me.

Great job deborah! i love it but you still might want to seperate the dioluge its kinda hard to follow. SAVANAH

THAT WAS GOOD!

oohh is so sad that bella is blind...*tear*

post the sequel asap i liked this story

baci

marta

its still great deborah keep writing tomarro though u might want to seperate the diolouge! SAVANAH :)

this is great deborah keep writin it and FAST! SAVANAH