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Reviews for: Moshi Moshi Mochi
geek x girl
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this! It was very cute, in a subtle way, and also very humorous. The simplicity of Fuu's diary entries leave a lot of room for the imagination. The idea of Mugen and Jin working with Fuu at a mochi stand is hilarious.

Haha, and most of all, I wonder what Mugen said to Shuuichi to scare him off...

Please keep writing!
Psychogizmo
2007-05-11 . chapter 1
Haha that was cute, good job. Very original. Zomg I love mochi...
Maiden-Chan
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
That was so sweet! It took me a second read-through to understand it (it bounced around a lot, and was a little bit hard to follow the first time), but this was truly adorable. :3
Kanashii.Umi
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
A bit random, but really CUTE!
narrizan
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Hisashiburi-dana, queasy-san,

My this was lovely lovely lovely. I loved how they went to find her and how she tries to be someone she isn't and fails and goes back to being her.

Diary type entries interspersed within the pounding give the hurting, missing and heartache a kind of poetic rhthym and flow.

Now I want mochi!*is hungry*, They do green tea ones over here and peach shigure here that is awesome. mm. Yummy.

zan out!
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