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falling leaf
2008-07-11
ch 1,
abuseit was awesome but when are you going to update the rewrite
SB01
2008-06-25
ch 23,
abuseAw, its a good fic! now i have to wait longer! oh well. what i like best about this fic is that sakura is portrayed as much more responsible and level headed, plus ranma and her have the ever cute brother-sister relationship going on! well, then i'll just read the rewrite! please continue to portray her as such!

(Shes my faveorite character, if only she wasn't bitchy and shallow in the anime, then she would be much more famous!)
vegas
2008-06-17
ch 4, anon.
abusey isnt itachi in yet!? he should be attracting her with his mysterious insanesess & taunting her with touching, then walking away as if nothing happened at alaa! where da hell did dat come from? i must be insane, later, imma go get some counselng...& therapy...& pills from the doctor...
sakura haruno
2008-06-01
ch 23, anon.
abuseplease give me a link to the sequal. i have been waiting for it and can't find it
please and thank you

SHAN'NARO
Adam
2008-03-17
ch 23, anon.
abuseHey there Largo. Just wanted to compliment you on great premise for a Ranma crossover and to share some views that I have on the story with you. First off, I disagree with this story being dead, but I will agree that it wasn't going as well as I had hoped. There were a few thing that I wish weren't there, like Sakura being topless during the rampage - preserve her modesty in the rewrite, please. Then there's the being stuck as a twelve year old part. Gotta find a way around that. Sucks that Kimi-chan died but the sequence was great and the fight choreography was intense so I think the fans can live with it. Calling her pervert-chan bugs the hell out of me, too. But this was easily one of the funniest and most interesting stories that I have read here(and that list is in the thousands). I hope you still continue this one but I also look forward to reading the rewrite of this story as well. The background history with what happened to Ranma and the Biju would also make a great stand alone series for you to write. Thanks if you read this and please note that this is not a flame. I have highly enjoyed the story that you crafted and look forward to reading more on it in the near future. Thanks again, friend.

Sincerely,
Adam
CandyGirl999
2008-03-14
ch 12,
abuseHa ha I loved the part were Naruto does Sexy jutsu and kisses Sasuke...again!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH! Any way would that be technically concidered Sasuke's first kiss from a girl or not?
Bobboky
2008-03-05
ch 23,
abusei love this fic... i will go check out the rewrite tomorrow
junemama
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abusethis chapter was good. I like especially how you made Sakura the powerful character in the story instead of the usually naruto and sasuke not that I don't like them or anything.
I just believe in girl power!

Well that's it would you mind checkin out my story please?
Yumi-danna
2008-02-14
ch 23,
abuse...T_T WHAT?!
Dracomancer1
2008-02-13
ch 23,
abuseAW MAN!
Piemur1
2008-02-13
ch 23,
abuseAww, this was such a great fic to read. Well, I hope the rewrite won't take long...could you perhaps explain to me why the fic died? Did it make a turn that you kinda stalled at? Mebbe you didn't intend for Sakura to go to Orochimaru or something?
Corsairs
2008-02-13
ch 22,
abuseI've followed this story for awhile now.

I think it's a waste of well written material now that you're leaving it behind. I am not whining. Though I must say I will miss Ranma/ Sakura.

I don't quite understand what you mean by a rewrite? Of the same story? Or different?

From yours truly,
Corsairs
Asgeras
2008-02-10
ch 22,
abuseWell, it took a while to get to it, but I'm glad I finally read Wild Cherry Blossom. I was a little reticent since I'm not exactly a Naruto expert, but I digress...

Overall, your fic is fairly sound. The Sakura/ Ranma conglomeration is quite strong, but not overly so. She definitely has her faults, to say the least. That being said, it's quite confusing where Ranma ends and Sakura starts, at least in the earlier chapters. Especially after the doors are swung open. My personal suggestion would be for Ranma and Sakura to fully merge with each other, but that's definitely up to your discretion.

One final point for the final chapter which has been released. Yes, Orochimaru would likely have at least a couple of tests for Sakura to pass. The one currently given (Sakura fighting off the Sound Four) is decent, as far as a gauge of strength, but there are bound to be tests which are a bit more sadistic in nature, in order to test her loyalty. These are the tests I have a little problem with, but do expect to see, if you want it to be more realistic. (grimace)

I have mixed feelings, to say the least, on Sakura being stuck in a 12-year-old's body for the rest of her life. Then again, if anybody could find a way around that, it would be Ranma.

Speaking of 12-year-olds, I don't particularly like what's going on with Sasuke. Then again, I've never cared for him much in canon, so...hm...I guess there's not much point to going any further with that comment. Do what you want with him, but I do hope to see him redeem himself. That's one of the things I like about fanfiction. It's often more serious and complex than the anime/manga is/was, which makes irredeemable characters become much more, well, redeemable. Not that he's exactly irredeemable, more like a bit too...Ryoga-esque, as you've pointed out yourself.

Well, that's it for now. Thank you for the fun read and I sincerely look forward to seeing more in the near future.
Gogolu
2008-01-23
ch 22, anon.
abuseImpressive.

More, more more...
...
2008-01-16
ch 22, anon.
abuseAny chance you're going to continue this? It'd be a waste to let to go to... well... waste.
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