ok now i want almond cake.

very nicely done. i always half expect something like this on the show- someone not really being who they think they are.

i loved parkman's intervention and nathan was very well done- not slimy just oppertunistic.

aw, the ultimate ending that all us Paire fans crave. good job!

Ja Ne! :D :)

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NOO ! EFF DHAT ! dnt go back to HP DNT GOO BAKK ! ahahahha gawsh im so obsesd .. srsly tho .

I .

EFFNG .

LOVED .

THIS .

STORY !

OMG ! I TOLD YU I LOVED THIS MORE THAN THE OTHERS XDD ahhahaha its so amazing ! every singly tiny detail :)

sinverguenza .. i swear , if yu ended it hia .. i wud still love it :) EFFNG HECTQ ! hahahahah )

Great story. Loved it.

Harry Potter? Harry Potter? Don't you DARE! You're one of the best Heroes writers around!

Loved it!

That was so beautiful. Perfect ending. I'm so glad the two of them are together finally. The way it should be.

KYA! That was SO GOOD!I heart you...so much... Now I can love Peter/Claire and not feel guilty!

AH! That was so good! Even if some of it was off and doesn't connect to future episodes, I read you only have watched a few. But still... kudos and bravo and kudos. XD

very very good!

very good story! I am so glad you made peter and claire not related so they could be together!

Aw, that last line was perfect.

Great fic. I love your style of writing. I hope you'll write another Heroes fic soon. :)

Aw, the end? Oh well, it did kinda feel like the end. It was a good story, I'll favourite it. Your only heroes one? shame.