that was so cute i really liked the whole thing where holly "got into character" that was cute. but i got confused when youcalled adrian and donovan elves. loved story

don't know if someones already told you this, but yes, faeries can mesmerize each other, but in doing so forfeit their powers, sorta like entering dwellings uninvited
please keep going
-ca

Wow! This is so EXCITING! Please update!

AH! CLIFFIE!
~Eva

AWESOME! I don't know why I didn't find this story sooner!
~Eva

OMG!This chapter rocks!This really wants me to be Holly now!I would totally love a sequel.U r such a good author it would be good for u!

This story rocks.Chapter 8 was totally not cheesy.It totally makes me want to be holly.Why you ask because I love Trouble Kelp.He makes me think of my very first crush.I don't know how but he does.Sorry I'm poring all of this out on u.The chapter was totally awesome!:)

Sequel, plz! I loved it!

OMG!! I'm the one laughing uncontrollably, not Holly! This is great!

this is so cute! I love the ending. You are a very brilliant writer.

Aww! *warm fuzzies for all*

First of all, I am SO INCREDIBLY SORRY for not reviewing this chapter earlier and not replying to your PMs! School has been overly hectic, and I was chosen for maybe 3 academic competitions. -_-; Thankfully, the competitions are now over. :D

As for your last chapter... *is sad to think of it as the last*
The ending with Holly and Trouble walking on the beach together was slightly cliché, but it still conveyed the feelings between Holly and Trubs. Plus, I absolutely LOVED your last line!

"So, maybe the sun was artificial, but there was no doubt about the reality of the feelings that were blossoming today between two certain elves who were walking on the beach."
UTTER BRILLIANCE!

Anyways, it's an awesome ending for this utterly awesome story. I can't wait to read more of your fics!

oh, and i forgot to ask...
sequel soon?? yes please!

that was so cute :)
one of the sweetest Holly/Trouble stories EVER
and amazingly written! I loved every single chapter.

rose
x

Wow! I can't believe that this is over!-this is such a great story and I would love to see a sequal, just don't push you're self too hard! Take a break, maybe a holiday in the Bahama's with a lemonade in one hand and you're adoring fans bowing before you! "ALL HAIL THE GREAT PARADISEGURL!" *bows*

Jess
XD XD XD

P.S Just watch out for us adoring fans-we have our dark sides! MWHAHAHAHA (don't worry, they're reserved for text message speak junkies at the moment!)

I'm soo sorry I didn't review sooner. I had school so I didn't have time.

Anyway that was a really good chapter. I liked the way you captured the emotions in words. Hmm... I didn't find anything wrong in the story, so thats a good sign.
Hehehe I read the whole story all over again just to find out if you missed something. The LEP officers got the bad guys right?

YES! Please make a sequal. The stories you right are awesome.