sweet story... :D

Not bad. Not the best, most 'cause of the grammar errors, but certainly not bad. With a bit of tweaking here and there, it could be a top-notch short story. My only real question: Isn't Rei's eyes violet? :/

good story nice bit of romance. :) keep up the good writing.

yay! I likey I likey.

I think... Beautiful really

Aww this was so sweet! I liked the bit of Mako x Ami too :D

your brain-cheese is cheesy! hehehe! :)

keep the minako/rei fandom coming, onegai shimasu...! :)

peace!

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That was very cute. Actually if it were an episode of the anime I could see Rei using a song... Great job, keep up the good work.

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Aside from a few grammatical errors, nothing is wrong structure wise at all with this fic. It's well written and solidly built. I would like to know however if the song is an original or if someone else wrote it. It sounds like an original to me. Good job with the story. If i can find it, i shall read the prelude to it. If there isn't one, you should write a prelude to it as i would love to hear the entire story! Keep up the good work!

Ja ne!

-LF 1080

Brain-cheese? Personaly, I think you where experiencing a brain storm, myself. As always, your story is romantic and well written. Keep up the good work.

Aww, this was a very sweet and cute story! Nice 'brain-cheese'. P Hope to see more from you!

I loved it! It was cute and I really got the overall feeling of the love between the two!