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| heartfallen 2007-10-15 ch 1,  | abuseloved all the banter and the conversation between Teyla and Ronon |
| Durithyll 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseaw! i loved it! so sweet! ...aw! |
| SupernaturalGeek 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was nice. I love Sheppard & McKay's relationship and it was a good idea to look at it from Teyla & Ronan's point of view. Very in character and made me chuckle at times too. Well done ;) |
| Llanea 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abusethat was incredible, any chanse of a sequal? maybe mckay gets worse back on atlantis or something? |
| Dimac99 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseA great short team fic, and so well written. Much as I love the McKay/Sheppard friendship, I really loved the moment with Teyla and Ronon at the end, bonding over their equally daft (but in different ways) team mates lol. |
| rebekah78 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful. I love a good whump and you certainly delivered. I felt awfully sorry for poor Rodney though. He was having such a rough mission. Thanks again so much. :) |
| Graffiti Kiss 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat? The end? You mean chapter 1, right?!?! What's wrong with poor Rodney? |
| gabumon 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abusesequel worthy! its so true how those 2 act, they fight but get over it right away. You captured it well |
| Tazmy 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuse:) thanks for sharing |
| Elisa 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved John's rant at the begining and then how he lost his anger fast when he saw Rodney sick - that was great! And Teyla, god she's great with phrasing her words carefully isn't she. And lastly, Ronon with his deep insightful words-wow! Loved the team LOVE! Thanks for another great story!! |
| Dr. Dredd 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseVery insightful view into the characters. Teyla and Ronon are perfect frames through which to view John and Rodney, since Teyla and Ronon have a similar relationship. |
| krysalys 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet. I would've liked to've known how this illness had affected Rodney's hypoglycemia, too. Heh. Excellent job as always, hon. -}-@ |