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midnightwaters
2009-10-10 . chapter 4
What a wonderful set of drabbles. Too bad you never continued it.
Amelia Lynn
2008-12-11 . chapter 4
Nothing like the person you love telling you your sexy to lift your spirits.
PropehcyGirlSBN
2008-08-01 . chapter 4
Aw.. these are so cute! Sweet, fluffy... whats not to like. I like the way you're writing them... I don't know, it just works for the story. It's not to rushed, ooc, or dragged out or anything. I really like this!!
unique.normality
2008-06-12 . chapter 4
Although I've kinda stopped reading manga... I couldn't help but read some EdXWinry
CreativebutLazy
2008-06-10 . chapter 4
Cute :)
rasenbyakuluv
2008-04-26 . chapter 4
adorable, wonderful, satisfying

these words all describe your fics

adorable- cute and cuddly but meaningful

wonderful-this kidn of explains itself

satisfying-not many people can satsfy my craing for all the info and a good story to boot in just a few lines.
CatsEyeFlashlight
2007-12-13 . chapter 1
loved it
Shinjite Florana
2007-10-14 . chapter 4
Kawaii! That last one was sweet. your so good at writeing! kepp it up! ^_-
Legendary Chimera
2007-06-21 . chapter 4
These are so cute! The last one made me laugh. Gotta go check out the rest! ~Mulzrule
Motosuwa-Hideki
2007-06-06 . chapter 2
OMG SO SORRY ><
I just re-read properly and i realised Al was just bringing her to ED ^^' GOMEN
Motosuwa-Hideki
2007-06-06 . chapter 4
Nice job, tho i hate the part she married Al -.-'
Motosuwa-Hideki
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
WAIT A SEC- i thought this was edxwin?
causmicfire
2007-06-05 . chapter 4
Ears is lovely and sweet in it's look at Ed's emotions and Winry comforting his unspoken despair.

Sensual is great because everyone can relate to wanting to be someone else just for a minute, but then something makes them see that they can get what they want just by being themselves. Plus it done so wonderfully in character.
Pensulliwen
2007-05-28 . chapter 4
I love all of the ficlets so far, I doubt I could pick a favorate. I'm amazed at how they're all so origional and the prospect of having almost 40 more to drool over. You're an amazing writer, can't wait for the next update!
Gabunny
2007-05-21 . chapter 4
Mmkay, I read this before I went to school but decided not to review until after b/c this way, I have time to give you a constructive crit, which it sounds like you want :D
Alrighty, so on ficlet 10, Ears, I think you did alright ^_^ I think you got the essence of how while Edo is a hella noisy kid, there's volumes of what he won't say, so well done. You started it and ended it well, but it did get rather vague and cliché around the middle, and I think you could have included more about Al. Alphonse is such a vital part of EdWin fics and while it is easy to ignore him its something you've really got to work hard at to avoid, because its not a good look - kind of like a sour aftertaste, if you will. Great job on your adjectives, though, they were quite whimsical =D
Ficlet juu-ichi was a good angle to take, as well. I liked mostly everything except for the part about other typical teenage girls laughing at her - again, just a tad too expected and overdone. Also, I don't think we can ignore that in FMA there are no girly female characters, and while its definitely possible that Winry had some in Rizenbool or whichever, I think you took it to an extreme which isn't plausible. Everything else was great though, and your ending made me laugh XD
Anywho! Great job, keep writing, and I hope that you enjoyed getting such a very long crit XD
-Gabunny
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