Wow, that was so powerfully sad. It was one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I'm serious. Amazing.

This was your first story? All I can say is wow, it is really excellent. Just a beautiful oneshot.

That was good, well done, I enjoyed it!

WOW! You did really, really good for your first fic. I mean AWESOME! I know you said no more chapters, but please consider it. You have some awesome talent.

This was great... very angsty and full of emotion. It's so sad reading these fics..

neat. the burst of spells was a nice touch... i dont think ive read a fic that used spell casting as a way to express emotions. nice idea.

Best story ever, I Love it! Thanx for writing it, would you please r&r mine? -xxxx- Jane Heartilly

Are there going to be any more chapters? If there are, I can't wait for them! If there aren't, there needs to be!

[sniff sniff] wow. that was beautiful. i love it. poor rinoa. poor squall. i would like to say you did a really great job writing this.

OMG! this is soo sad...poor squallie...*sniff*..i'm crying..damn...this is a vary good story keep up the good wrightings -

Very good story dont kill off squall that would be sad! hehe anyway i forgot with summery went for this story but you should have someone fall in love with squall and he love her! hehe that would be happy! hehe anyway great story best i have read all night in this category! yay

this was your first fic? DAMN! that wsreally good! i mean realy good i hat you! lol

That was really really sad.

Nice. I read this on some other site a long time ago.

Sounds familiar. Got it posted anywhere else? I know I've read it. Cried then, cried now. Both sad and wonderful!