This is an interesting fic. A little hard to describe. But you have a cool writing style.

This story really got to , it was amazing!It was so well written, almost poetic I might say, right? With this Alice and all...beautiful!

You also captured the characters real good (again *lol*) and I especially liked the end with Dean feeling so miserable and near tears and Sammy being the one shouting for John.

Really enjoyed reading this!

Kritty

Lovely (and very sad!) wee!Dean-centric story. You write children so well, from their cruelty, to their curiosity, to their innocence. The loss of their mother must have loomed so large in these early years and I love how you've explored that here!

Thank you!

it was great D

I love alice's caracter and how you wrote dean and Your whole story actually :)

the end semme kind of incomplete to me though.

This is absolutely amazing. So atmospheric. This is the sort of story that stays with you. I'm adding you to my favourite authors.

This story is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! So much emotion, everything was just perfect. I love it.

-Violet-

Oh my goodness. What a devastating story. The loss that Dean (and Alice) feel is so palpable, and the feeling of being a child, powerless in an adult world, is just heartbreaking. I am so pleased to have found a brand new SN author to devour. I will spend the rest of the afternoon reading all your stories. If I get fired from my job, can I stay at your house? (Kidding, of course. But not the part where I plan on closing my office door and pretending I'm on a "conference call!")

Oh, creepy and heartbreaking all at once. And Dean, like any other child, striking back at Alice when he's been hurt first. Excellent story, just excellent!

You know- I can't bear to think of the boys at school. It must have been hell.

Great story, well-written, very creepy.

aw! Poor broken boys! Great story! I loved how you put Alice in there and how her words affected Dean when she herself was in a similar postion. Amazing writing!

-Marvin

That was beautiful. I really liked the way you wrote Dean. More, please.

There are three, maybe four, writers out there that can make my week by simply posting a new story and you are one of them! Yes, this was a little darker than what I consider to be your “norm” but you still managed to make me smile, even laugh, at young Sam with all his curiosity and bravado. And Dean… wow, you really drew an accurate picture of a pre-teen boy with more responsibility than he should have! I was very impressed!

Thank you for writing and posting this. As always, I can’t wait for your next one!

Your writing is so beautiful. I can see everything. My God daughter does the hand thing, so that stole my heart from the beginning. I have missed your stories. They are rare gems.

Thank you for sharing,

Ridley

Loved it. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Oh.

My.

Absolutely lovely. Perfectly, exactly Dean...well, as I imagine he was in his youth...desolate and desperate.

I love it!

Emrys