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| kimonomoon 2007-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story... can't stop laughing over the names as well as the story line. u must be pretty smart at 3rd grade. very creative teacher as well... math in writing... tho i hav to comment on the seven squares name... its very creative but for math (what i learned of) "answer" is called "equal". mathematically.. it is not 'answer'.. just equal, rite? still, Great story for a 3rd grader.. maybe you can make it as a challenge for your future pieces? interesting combination |
| Xx 2007-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL! Very amusing story xDD |
| Azure-x-Rose 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abusethat was really funny great job! i think i'll send this story to one of my more recently depressed friends. hopefully it'll make her START to smile again, and if we progres, it might even make her laugh! though i shouldn't get my hopes up. anyway brill story. hope to see more. JA NE! ^_^ |
| Nixiesocean 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseHahaha. Very cute. I loved the names of the squares. |
| Usagi of Feudal Moon Era 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseBWA HA HA! That was actually pretty funny. I think the oddest thing is that this is better written than some fanfics that are written by teenagers+. Also, I can relate to finding old stories. The other day I found a pile of stories that I wrote when I was probably about six years old. I don't even remember writing them. It was actually rather amusing reading stories that were about ten sentences long which I wrote about my stuffed animals and seeing the crazy pictures I drew. Oops I kind of rambled there. Hope you don't mind my little story. Anyhoo, congrats. You've come a long way. |
| monkey kix ass 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abusethat's a really cute story, and really good for a third grader. well, i hope you update your other stories again soon! |