Reviews for A Sangheili Pirate in the UNSC Navy

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Truth and Reconciliation 2007-10-04 ch 7,	abusewow nice story! Please update!
Half-Jaw 2007-09-28 ch 7,	abuselove it. Still can't stop laughing at Telek. I love that Elite.
Cyndi 2007-09-27 ch 7,	abuseTelek the whirling dervish of death! Fifteen minutes with him could save you fifteen percent of your Geico blood loss insurance! Okay that's enough Geico jokes O_o; I love the banter he always has with whoever he's with during a mission! He's the one-liner king!
Spacefan 2007-09-27 ch 7,	abuseI agree with the review that Telek needs to meet up with the Master Chief. You REALLY must have Telek have a run-in with John 117 like you did with Jacob Keyes. I'm already laughing at THAT encounter. The human of so little words and the Sangheili with the wicked and humorous parting shots. Anyway, another great chapter...
Cant Namemyself 2007-09-26 ch 7,	abusewell aside from some grammatical errors, the base bare-bones idea is very good. but i wonder if they met MC? Also, since this a crew of Elite commandos, what would they do? Telek, has more style and feels more "human" than MC, a foil if you will.
KaneBuddy 2007-09-26 ch 7,	abuseBravo, Bravo, (Clap Clap Clap) the story is even more interesting and although I personally prefer shorter chapters (I have like half an hour on the internet daily) this is very good, tops out your other chapters too. There were a few cases of misused "there's" and the like, but grammar mistakes dont take away too much from otherwise well-planned out chapters like this.
Extra guy without purpose 2007-07-22 ch 6, anon.	abuseThe Sangheili speaking in several languages is pretty funny. “Because I can’t understand a word he says when he talks like that." LOL. Telek was a bit different in chapter 6, so I guess he didn't drink that day?
Half-Jaw 2007-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI love your work with the Sangheili pirate. Love it. There are parts of your other stories about Telek that I can't stop laughing. quote from Parley and Betrayal " Like you, I just follow the orders I am given. I’ll sit, rollover, beg, and play dead by the orders of the High Council whom Truth presides over." Keep up the great work.
Nyhtmare 2007-06-06 ch 6,	abuseLOL!! I thought I had seen weird things written before, but, seeing Sangheili speak spanish, french and german is definatly at the top of the list now.
CII 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseThank you for the support. Though with this chapter, I kinda ran into a writer's block. I hate those.
KaneBuddy 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseI like it. seems different from the other chapters for some reason though. I saw one or two grammer errors, and the whole "stars in slipspace" thing, but still a great addition to a great story, and very unique.
Spacefan 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseAw! That was so cute! But Telek seemed subdued, not his usual wry self.
Cyndi 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseROFL TOM GOT HAZED! TOM GOT HAZED! XD j/k, but it did seem a little like a hazing ceremony! I hope he was wearing clean underwear. I'm glad he won the respect of both crews from that, hopefully that will benefit him in the future. 'Till next time! :)
BastardSon1 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseJust got one small thing to criticize, There are no stars in slipspace, nor is there anything else to see, other than that, great story.
PLC 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseI've just recently read your PM - terribly sorry. You see, this account isn't my regular one. I can tell you my regular one if you wish so. But then, on to the review. People aren't giving you enough credit. I have no idea if the lack of proper reviews (25, currently, right? That's at least five per chapter. Tsk, not enough in my standards - I consider it below minimum, with a story as good as this) are caused by laziness or leechers or the anonymous lock, but if I would guess, quite a number of people read it, yes? Perhaps they were too lazy to send a review. I'm looking forward to more of Telek's adventures. The creativity you put in creating President Knight was amazing - nobody has ever thought of that, which makes this story astoundingly unique. The humorous touch made it a very entertaining read. You even moved me to entertain the notion of making a fan's fiction about your fanfiction, if you get my drift. Your stories are certainly very excellent. I'd like to support you in any way I can. Ah, and if I may comment: you are certainly a unique writer. Usually, writers easily disregard their reviewers' comments once they have finished reading them. I'm very pleased to see that you take the effort of sending a private message to your reviewer. You have made me a fan. Congratulations.

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