Very nice little ficlet.

aw beautiful :)

That was nicely done. Very quiet. Very appropriate. Beautiful details in the water, sky and seating. Just lovely.

fantastic as always! lovely bit there at the end! and i definitely dont think it is out of line in regards to john's actions!

Thank you. That was sweet, and I enjoyed your descriptions. Especially how you describe the silence that descends after they greet each other.

VERY BEAUTIFUL, NICE WORK

Ah, that was sweet, and at just the right amount.

Ah, I love feeling little butterflies flutter in my stomach!

Thanks!

Sweet...

Teyla is always important to John,he takes time from what he is doing how serious it is to see her and make sure she is okay...

They truly have a bond on the show and you shows perfect just what such a strong friendship they have come to have between them...

And a little sweet moment there in the end.. both of them maybe drawing strenght from the other..

So thanks for sharing...

This is nice. Fitting and really nice.

"When she lets go of him, he lets her go.

They sit on the pier until the sun is high in the sky."

Perfect. Just perfect. : )