I'm sorry you never finished this fic, though I'm sure you've got your reasons. I think it's really good, especially the parts with Omi and Ken in the tunnels. Omi was very much in character, which was nice. And, while I'm not generally a fan of OCs, yours aren't so bad. ; And I mean that in the best way possible.

Anyway, it was refreshing to read such a good fic in this fandom, and I hope you'll finish it someday.

Good, very good. I eagerly anticipate the chapters which will follow. Please get them out soon. SC

i'm very po'd at them. they fucked with schu's body. _ they *will* die, right?

ohhh I remember this story... interesting! Can't wait to see how it turns out Rindou

jeeez, did i WAIT for that chapter...but i'm glad you're continuing this fic, danke danke. the story's unique, so please keep writing! _

Evil for letting us hang like that, but still good.

Your character interactions are superb. Your writing style is relaxed, it's pacing and flow is marvellous. The conversation you write between two characters is flawless. I'm in anticipation for the next chapter. My deepest regards, continue writing.

XD you better fix Schu. maybe...yeah...ken/schu! _v write more, please.

this is interesting. I like it. get the next part out as soon as you can. It's really good!

wow...this is incredible! The way you portray the characters really gives them a i-know-where-you've-been sort of feel. Because, come on, how many of us haven't blown up at someone unintentionally because we just didn't know what we were doing? Very good job, but I still wanna know what went on during their mission! write more!

I hope you read your reviews _;; Please add another chapter to this. Thanks.

Wow! This is /fantastic/! I hope you're planning on adding to it, because I really want to see where this is going. Very different, and wonderfully written. :)

Wai! This is good! Ooooh... What's going to happen next? How are Yohji and Aya going to find the others? Poor Ken and Omi! And poor Schuschu too, with his "parting" comment and all... ;_; Heh... your character interactions are all very cute, too _ This is good!

Hey...*angry glare* Continue!

This is great, you must continue!