Wow I really like this story. I can't wait for more. :D

Great job!!

Just finished reading what you've written, so I thought I would be nice and review.

I really like it! I like futuristic stories, and I like yakuza. It's a bit different from how I would set it up--but it's your story not mine. I like how you are trying to stay with the main story of Shippuden, which is rather ambitious but I wish you luck with it.

If you ever think to revise it--maybe you could change thier ages a bit? In Japan, students are required to only attend school through 9th grade, so I could easily see events getting set into motion at that time. =3 But that's my only complaint, and a minor one at that.

I am really looking forward to more chapters, because this seems like a good story and I have a weakness for sci-fi. And ninja-yakuza. Heh heh.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Greater Chapter! I didn't expect Hinata to be blind. But the way you made it is awesome and believable. That scene with her and Naruto was so cute! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see the rest of the teams in the modern world.

you've done a good job of drawing me in, setting up the background AND the ambiance. but the flashback w/hinata and naruto is just beautiful. i think i'll enjoy what you have coming very much.

I'm still not too sure about what's going on, but I'm going to assume that they're in gangs within a city..? With guns and stuff...

Btw, what does Shigakure mean?

Nice...different, though. I don't quite understand...so it's the characters of Naruto...in a modern city? O.o Eh?

Oh and...Two Tailed Angel! Need update! Rawr!

Got a good feeling about this story. Sounds like you're really getting into the flow of the story. I don't remember what you said Team 8 or 10 did, I can't wait to find out how they're involved with the Yakuza. I sent an email to you a while ago, and I hope you got it cause I can't tell if and when my computer screws up. I hope you starting getting more attention for this story soon. Honestly it's a nice breath of freshair from all those stupid Highschool AU stories. Talk to you soon RJ. Update Soon!

Cool you finally got around to doing your Yakuza story! This'll be fun, now I got two stories to review! Keep me if you need me to look over anything. Update Soon!