the fanfiction was AWSOME. i love it.
it's that awsome, that i'm adding it to my favourites. XD

AW!
So cute! Im really happy about the turnout of this story because you twisted it and made L live! YAY! The story was great! But, i must add, that there was a few spelling mishaps in there, but all the same I LOVED IT and you rock for making L live and Im adding you, and the story to mah faves! Thank you very much for posting this! 5/5! XD

great beginning ^_^ and somehow "S" just seems more cooler and mysterious then L or N or M

p.s: like the title of the story

It was a very cutesy story that made u feel good when u read it. Just work on your spelling. that's the only suggestion i have.

oh gosh this fic is so good. I really do love it! It did make me sad though that Sab can't have babies...I admire that you never truly said what Sab looked like. It takes a good writer to be able to do that. I commend you once again.

Sorry I took so long. I virtually forgot about the story.

Anyways, I thought the last two chapters were nice, but I felt as if they were quite rushed. I understand that you wanted to get this story off your back, I felt the same way with one of my stories, but, case in point, I never introduced so many plot entanglements.

Their relationship seemed to have sky rocketed, in every sense of the word; I thought sex was a bigger leap from lovey-dovey kissing.

I suppose, we all learn from our mistakes, and strive to do better. I think this is what writers do. Overall, a nice, romantic story, but it could have been better.

Good luck for your future stories. :]

aww i love this
it was so cute

kool story i luv it

L in a Santa outfit? Lol What I wouldn't give to see him wear that. Nice, fluff-filled chapter. :]

I really like it! I can't wait to read the later chapters.

K-A-W-A-I-I ^^

That was so cute! It made it seem a little more real, that it may have actually happened, the way you wrote it ^_^

great chapter, i love ur story

cute story keep it up

::Two thumbs up:: Yeah!