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CoCo82
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Another wonderful fic! This was amusing, interesting and a thoroughly entertaining read.
Bit disappointed in Severus but love seeing Hermione and Lucius together.
Duco Lacuna
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
Spectucular as ever! I laughed many times while reading this, but I think that the ending had me cracking up the most. The repeated dialogue and appearance of newcomers was so very funny! I do thank both your muse and you for writing this amusing tale which also involved my favourite pairing of Lucius and Hermione.

Absolutely perfecto! :)
Rosiebuds
2008-04-08 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
missmonicaaaa.
2007-12-06 . chapter 1
that was bloody amazing.
i haven't read a fanfic that good in AGES.
it was perfect.
the narration with the muse was superb, and the eloquency of Hermione's and Lucius's dialogues was flawless.

and it was hilarious.
the part with the shrieking hormones was absolutely priceles :D
mcdreamy1992
2007-11-23 . chapter 1
I...I am speechless with admiration for your writing style. It is witty and very well written. I loved the last bit especially!
Magick
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Oh goodness, this has got to be one of the funniest stories I have read in a very, very long time! I love the writing style, I dont think Ive ever read anything quite like it. Bravo, very very good =)
misssweetsweet
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
Very amusing story. I enjoyed reading it.
snagerlover50309
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
OMG too good ! I really like the way your muse grabbed you and shook you like this LMAO! LOVED it 5 stars my friend
x-Lazart-x
2007-06-09 . chapter 1
Loved this story!! You're a really talented writer adn I can't wait for your next fic!
JMH
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
I love to read interesting stories concerning various pairings (sometimes..the more odd the better!) and I was delighted when I started to read yours. I think you had a very accurate caricature of Severus, if he ever did get married. And as sweet as the story was, I still had my share of smirks at the witty banter.

Keep up the good work.
Lucius's Mistress
2007-05-16 . chapter 1
I love this story! It was very well-written and awesome. I loved Lucius in it!

Keep writing!


~Lucius's Mistress~
gravity01
2007-05-03 . chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant.
blackmoonsilver
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
well, well! what do we have here? A mud...muggleborn author pretending to know how the magical world works! as much as it pains me to admit it, you seem to actually know what you're doing!

I am more than pleased I have taken to reading your story , since it turned out to be a deliciously well-written journey so far, interspersed with extremely hilarious issues of high quality too. & writing it from a neutral point of view, that is an omniscient author, has definitely spared you any criticism on not completely understanding the ways of the wizarding world.

however reading this ...very long one shot gives me a refreshing, new view on the matter & the characters. OH! The joys of diversity! is it not so, my dear?

so, I reviewed & you'd better appreciate my help since it is not every day a Malfoy offers you a hand without taking something from you first! *sneering*

sincerely,
Lucius Malfoy (registered as Blackmoonsilver for common mortals here)

{*hope the immitation of L. Malfoy was a good one. lol* #wink wink# pretty hard to imperson him when you're a girl. lol}
OnlyAtNight
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
How very extraordinary! Very, very, very well written - entertaining and Fun (capital F). It reminded me of a "Carry On" movie. Thanks.
Ythefrown2daY
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
Excellent. Simply excellent. It is so refreshing to finally be able to read a story by an author who has both wonderful ideas and good grammar. Thanks so much for the good read! Keep it up!
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