I've never heard of The Invisible, but this was an interesting story. I'll have to look into it.

THat was GREAT!

great job!
I really liked The Invisible as well, I actually saw it because it seemed vaguely Veronica Mars-esque to me, so kudos on the idea of combining them.
and I was so glad *spoiler* that Veronica didn't die at the end of this.

very nice...I'm really happy that he's okay...but I sorta figured that that is how it would end...heh...with school out...I am definitely gonna go see this movie...OH...on Monday...Monday I am off of work...heh...anyway...really liked this story
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MONICA

oh...I so want to see that movie...must read the book too...always better than the movie...heh...but yeah...anyway...this is a great start and I will finish it up when I wake up in a few hours cuz I really need sleep...but this is a great first chapter
^_^
MONICA

shame this wasnt longer cos its a really good story.

glad it had a happy ending.

Aw...so sweet...I haven't seen the movie yet, but now I want to! :) Great story!

love it, can you make a sequel? or start a new story?

i really enjoyed this chapt/story. It sucks that ended i wish u would do more or a seqel even.Good Job.

short and sweet.

i'll be checking that movie once its out on dvd.

great job with this story.

Wonderful! I loved this story! It's one of your bests!

Great job with this...you made it very enjoyable!

So cute!

This is crazy...really good...can't wait to read more!

This story is very cool. I still would like to see the movie, but I couldn't resist reading an L/V version of it now.

Can't wait for the last part!