Reviews for By Dawn's Early Light

Reviews For: By Dawn's Early Light

The Little Corinthian 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseAw, too sweet. :0P Nice job!
nikki.02 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is a great portrayal of their 'married life' with kids and everything. Loved it and great descriptions.
twinkeyrocks 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abuseI can so see Danny with a baby!!
angel6 aka trinigyal 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abuseThis was a beautiful piece, I absolutely loved it! I love that they have a son, I could picture Danny holding his son, nothing but love in his eyes. Loved it! Fantastic work! Keep it up! -angel6
JennCorinthos 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseAwe! Danny and Lindsay have a baby... I loved this... What they were going through so realistic... JENNIFER
my-sparkles 2007-05-09 ch 1,	abusemelting on a poodle of sweetness and hotness sighs Quoting - "She turned onto her side, staring at the figure next to her. He was in his usual position, sprawled inelegantly on his back, his arms flung wide, taking up three quarters of the bed. He was frowning slightly, his forehead creasing and un-creasing at the pictures playing in his mind. A sudden memory of the first time she had laid in bed, watching him sleep, was swiftly followed by other memories of long, lazy days spent in each others arms, making love. In the stillness of the early dawn, with nothing to do but remember, she let the memories wash over her, sending a warmth spreading through her body. The longing turned to need." - I love this paragraph, 'cause it just screams tenderness, desire, companionship, INTIMACY, LOVE. Words are just perfect. You displayed here a dawn/morning moment that can be so common in couples' life and yet, you did it with an unique touch. claps Loved it. Oh, and the M&M' baby? giggles I know that sooner or later, their love will be translated into a sweet child. And I'm more that glad that you materialized that wish of mine. ;) Thanks! :)
GRACE5 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abuseby far the best D/L fic I ever read. great job!
notesofwimsey 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseI love that you left the timing uncertain - I thought she was pregnant, but I love that Dany is changing his son at the end of the story! Lovely, lovely! You write great passionate, emotion-filled sex (my favourite type!).
Leena7 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseIt's got fluff AND sex, what's not to like.
peanut2lb 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was a lot of tenderness for fifteen minutes in the wee morning hours. I love the idea of Danny and Lindsay becoming parents. Quote: Lying on his back he was an easy target and she inched one hand slowly across the well defined muscles of his abdomen. Two years of marriage hadn’t taken away the enjoyment she got from feeling the muscles bunch and shudder beneath her hand as, even in his sleep, he responded immediately to her touch. I got a really nice sense of imagery here!! Again great job!!
Quintessence of Darkness 2007-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, such an adorable little one shot. It was really lovely. A nice little bit of night time reading before beddy byes ^__^ I love it. Great little story :)
Lily 2007-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was so sweet!! You had me goin' for a second that they were both just working way too much, then all of the sudden everything makes perfect sense when poof there's a baby!! LOVED this!! Well put together. The words and ideas all flow.
daytimedrama 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseso sweet and sexy!
SallyJetson 2007-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abusequote-He was in his usual position, sprawled inelegantly on his back, his arms flung wide, taking up three quarters of the bed. He was frowning slightly, his forehead creasing and un-creasing at the pictures playing in his mind. I just love this picture you have painted of Danny. quote-Lying on his back he was an easy target and she inched one hand slowly across the well defined muscles of his abdomen. Two years of marriage hadn’t taken away the enjoyment she got from feeling the muscles bunch and shudder beneath her hand as, even in his sleep, he responded immediately to her touch. And this is just such a hot paragraph... a perfect snapshot of their love and desire for each. quote-As the digits on the clock changed to 4:59 am; an outraged wail ripped through the peace of the apartment. And here comes the squall meant in more ways than one. But you make it all better in the end... quote-a smile on her face as she listened to her husband crooning soft words of love to their son as he began to change his diaper. A lovely, hot, and throughly sweet read!
Gaelen Kerr 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseREally - wow, that was too sweet. I loved it. Great job.

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