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-w- easy enough
2009-11-27 . chapter 94
woot! I love that you do drabbles that connect into a story. It makes each chapter more satisfying when it ends. XD I love how you portray Sesshomaru! ^_^
angel19872006
2009-11-24 . chapter 94
please update
Silent.Observation
2009-11-18 . chapter 85
oh ma gawd! So cute!! Poem was so pretty!!
Silent.Observation
2009-11-18 . chapter 84
a, too true,too true. I could totally see sesshomaru taking in the little otter.
emmyjenny
2009-11-17 . chapter 94
nice interesting chapter :) i like how it's turning out :) and i can't wait to see what happens :)
Silent.Observation
2009-11-16 . chapter 40
*tries in vain to smother hysterical giggles* Aw! So cute, in a bug-crushing sort of way!
Nyuka
2009-11-16 . chapter 94
Wow its been awhile but at least its like super long...XD...Gosh its almost finished I hoped that you update faster this story is just to delicious to stay away from for long...hehe...Nyuka
Silent.Observation
2009-11-15 . chapter 16
oh my gosh, I love it!! Sesshomaru's being so protective, but he refuses to acknowledge it! Gotta love denial. :]
Ardent Ly
2009-11-14 . chapter 94
Can't wait to read more ^^
Romancelover1321
2009-11-14 . chapter 94
Wow Sesshomaru I think he may e getting along with his brother. But it is all to Miroku of course. Great job.
Nebride
2009-11-13 . chapter 94
Oh, I think that smile of his could make many people cringe. This was a fabulous chapter! I love this fic too. Eager to see how you wrap it all up.
Chelly18
2009-11-13 . chapter 94
Sweet the final battle is almost here. Can't wait for the next update. I love how everything's coming together.
Katy-Chan
2009-11-13 . chapter 94
i love this story
is that so wrong?
I'm ready fer battle!
MoonDancer1750
2009-11-12 . chapter 94
Chapter 85: Mutual--Almost there ...;-)

Chapter 86: Waylaid--Ok, points for the Lord of the Rings (including the Hobbit), wording. Nice. ;-P

Chapter 87: Object--Make that so close and yet ... stubborn inuyoukai.

Chapter 88: Cornered--Do I see a glimmer of hope? For Inuyasha and Sesshomaru to become true brothers? ... ... maybe. ;-)

Chapter 89: Sentience--Isn't that what we all want in the end? Someone's approval? Very well done! XD

Chapter 90: Attainment-- All I'm gonna say is O_O!

Chapter 91: Lull--Maybe she is starting to sense him like he can sense her? Hmm ...

Chapter 92: Sheath--It is often that which we seek, that we find is already there within reach. If we have but the courage to grasp it! ;-)

Chapter 93: Omamori--Yes! He accepted her friendship--that's the first step! Yea!

Chapter 94: Cullmination--Ooh, br! O_O what will Sesshomaru do? Hmm ...

YEA! I did it! 94 chappies! Yippee! This time I won't wait so long to read and review. Love it! XD
MoonDancer1750
2009-11-11 . chapter 84
Chapter 75: Tea House--He tried to make her feel better! All the people in the community say, "AW!" ;-)

Chapter 76: Regret--Alright group say it with me, "One step forward ... 10 steps back."

Chapter 77: Convalescence--This sums it up quite nicely: “He’s very protective… when he’s not being very stubborn.”

Chapter 78: Hinge--Does gravity exist? Or does it exist b/c you believe it is so? Well done! ;-)

Chapter 79: Declaration--This time I'll let Inuyasha say it for me: “Sneaky bastard got out-snuck.” ;-P

Chapter 80: Cover--What a battle plan ... but it got her out of there so they could ... HEY! That was his intent all along wasn't it! Man is he good! XD

Chapter 81: Distribution--Hmm ... he's thinking about her and what she may think of him. Progress! ;-)

Chapter 82: Formidable--Truer words were never spok...er written. Well done!

Chapter 83: Thief--I like how you use two words then a few sentences then two words again. Gives a precise-ness to the whole thing. Just like Sesshomaru ... hm...

Chapter 84: Tagalongs--Hmm ...

Yes! Another ten! YEA! But that means :-( there's only 10 left! DX
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