This is such a great story I hope you will come back and continue this

I just found this story again and I love it. I was hoping it would stay NP, I really enjoy their dynamic. Great writing, update soon :)

love the leyton action update soon

So I just sat and read this entire story. I love it!I wonder if Naley will ever work things out. I'm loving Leyton. UD Soon :-)

I was hoping that Pathan would eventually return to one another but I guess that wish ain't going to happen anymore

Amazing chapter...update soon.

I really miss this story!! I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to read more of this amazing story!! :) please ud soon!

Just wanted to let you know that I'm still here and still loving the story. I can't wait for an update, with hopefully some good things in store for Nathan and Peyton. Wink Wink.

Take care!

I really love this story...and since I havent read all the chapters I cant say who I want Peyton with Nathan or Lucas...cause I am a big Leyton fan..but some stories that have Peyton and Nathan together are really good.

ok so I have to say..I love this story so far...I cant wait to read the rest of the chapters!

please update soon...i love where this is going. my heart is pulling for lucas and peyton to be together!

nonono i like np:)
really good story! can't wait til you come back!
good luck with your computer troubles:P

I dying a little bit inside because Nathan and Peyton's conversation all but sealed the deal on them ending their realationship and moving on. I'm having a hard time wrapping my mind around Peyton saying that her and Nathan's relationship was based on their unresolved feeling for Haley and Lucas. nathan and Peyton came together again after helping each other deal with their heartbreak. They weren't replacing the love they lost with their love for each other, they were healing and doing what Peyton wants to do right now, moving on.

Yes, Nathan made a mistake by sleeping with Haley, but for Nathan it wasn't about intimacy and love, it was about him being hurt and feeling lost after he saw Peyton with Lucas. Even though Peyton and Lucas haven't slept together, she's been doing the same thing with Lucas since she and Nathan broke up. I wish that she could see that.

I'm glad that Nathan was honest and told Peyton exactly what he thought about him being a rebound for her. She needs to see that Nathan is devestated and fighting to hold on even if she's not.

I'm not really happy that Peyton is letting go of Nathan so easily when it's obvious that she loves him, in order to basically see if she and Lucas have a chance. Yes, Lucas loves her, but will he admit it and does Peyton truly love Lucas and want to be with him or does she crave teh stability and peace that she finds in him? I guess only time will tell.

Great chapter, event though my heart is breaking.

Ohh, the moment was perfect and it was ruined! The NP scene at the beach was beautiful, their words were perfect. And the LP scene at the end couldn't have been better. I loved it, UD really soon!

Good post.

It would be good in the end to see Lucas admiting to his feelings for Peyton. I was almost "betting" it was about Karen.