I really like this. You do a good job with the characters, making them sound like themselves; I could really see this happening. I also really liked the way you ended it with a little ambiguity leaving room for more development in their relationship...

First off, I bow down to you in thanks for not only writing a "League of Their Own" fanfic, but hinting towards a Dottie/Jimmy pairing. I liked the story and your take on this particular scene of the movie. I'll be checking to see if you write any more stories regarding the movie because it's rare to find any thing "A League of Their Own" related.

Though I'm likely unfit to review, being that I havn't seen the movie in ages, I have this to say:

Short, sweet, and to the point.

Overall, cute. Not exactly anything I've ever expected to say about your writing - cute - but thats the word I'm sticking with. And funny. And witty. For a oneshot, very impressive, and very effective.

Can't wait to see what you'll do with a longer "A League Of Their Own" fic. I'll be watching out for it.