 Crystalline Virtues 2007-10-02 . chapter 1What Asuka was doing..? She was crying... wasn't she...? *wince*
Anyway, I liked it. We ll written, and Shinji's emotions were accurate. A nice little one shot.
I'll be looking for more of your stories. Keep writing^^ |
 ShigMan 2007-05-06 . chapter 1Hahahaha, good oneshot, What was Asuka doing I wonder? I can think of a few things but I wont say... they don't bear mentioning on review pages. Aanyways good story, made me laugh. |
 jcmoorehead 2007-05-02 . chapter 1Nice one shot there, interesting to see the reaction there and I'm pretty sure I know what Asuka was doing, same as in Episode 9. Not really much else to say, you could expand this into seeing what happens in the morning but it's nice as is. |
 Shinigami Kira 2007-05-01 . chapter 1BAKA you dont leave stuff like that to MY imagineation cuz i over analize everything and for me that not a good thing but as for the story i likes it and should start to read more of your stuff
keep up the qualty reads
Kira |
 Himonky 2007-05-01 . chapter 1It's good.
And I'm glad I finally found all of those songs...even if I did have to guess almost randomly.
A late night encounter between two roommates. Some confusion, a bit of spying and some lying. Makes for an interesting read, though I wonder if I'm still missing something. |