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| Omnicat 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuse*shivers* This makes her feelings of betrayal and refusal to be 'fooled' by him later on all the more poignant. |
| Kiwi Curry 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuse... wow... there's nothing I can say about this. Power in the words, clearity, total compassion... I'm speechless. |
| Katterree Fengari 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI loove the idea of her practicing with burn wounds. Although I don't care for getting rid of Zuko's scar (part of his character), I like Katara as the ultimate healer. |
| bagpipeturtle 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, this was very beautiful. Good job. :) |
| master of toast 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseOMG -tears up- That was awesome. At one pint I was like OMG katara is emo, then I'm like oh how sweet she still wants to heel him Great story |
| adine0212 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG Jak, how I love this story. And I love you too. ;p |
| Fireflies n Bubblegum 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. Stunning. x |
| xcgirl08 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseOh dear Lord. That was...perfect. Everything about it was flawlessly written, the emotions and the characters alike. I'm actually in tears, and have been reminded of every reason why I love this couple and why I think it should happen. I'm just astounded. |
| AcuteSensibility 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Simply amazing. And Zutara! That always makes my day better. |
| ohsoxalive 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI must say, this was so beautiful and so brilliant. You see, I am a fan of good ansgt. I like to say, it's good for the soul, and I truly believe that. Your writing is so amazing! I have and still do, read your works with awe. I doubt I could write angst like that, no matter how hard I tried. xD But always, Zutara all the way! |
| Jasmine Dragon 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was so sweet and adorable:D. the kind that just makes you even more anxious for Season Three to start, after you've analyzed it so well. You did a great job. |
| JillRG 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI love it. This one line especially makes sense when you think about it, "She’s never been good at dealing with people in pain. She cares too much--for her family, for strangers, and even for banished princes who’ve become her sworn enemy." For anyone who thought she was too rash in her offer. Maybe, but it's in sync with her character as we've seen it before. I liked both sections, but it would be better if it ended at "She wonders if she can’t heal those scars, too." The two sections don't seem to fit *together*. Would be perfect as two spearate fics. |
| foolish-sage 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great vignette. You're very good at evoking emotion, this was interesting to read. |